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This poem has drawn inspiration from G M Hopkins' "O the mind, mind has mountains; cliffs of fall Frightful, sheer, no-man-fathomed. Hold them cheap, May who ne’er hung there."

The mind has peaks no Sherpa knows sudden drops where thoughts thin out like oxygen at twenty thousand feet. Avalanche thoughts bury certainty. Your grip tears skin on ice-sharp edges of almost-understanding. Below are the crevasses deep as yesterday's regrets, echoing familiar voices lost in white. Wind cuts through the space between base camp comfort and what waits above the death zone. Frostbite burns circle your fingertips the attempt to hold what altitude has already stolen. Only the fallen know the weight of thin air. Only the hanging over glacier cracks know the value of solid ground. This terrible geography some must navigate alone.

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Date: 6/8/2025 6:05:00 PM
So true. A destructive your words are why I will never attempt the Himalaya climb. If you have accomplished it, you are brave. I thank you for this armchair trip.
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Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 6/11/2025 7:22:00 AM
It is amazing, a lap in itself. But very dangerous. One has to be lucky enough. Thanks
Date: 6/4/2025 10:52:00 AM
Nice poem with intense thoughts.
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Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 6/4/2025 10:22:00 PM
Thanks, Jay Sir. How are you?
Date: 6/3/2025 6:27:00 PM
your wording nicely reflects meaning..... walking wonders and waking dreams ....len
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Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 6/3/2025 6:52:00 PM
Thanks, Sand Blown, for your appreciative words.

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