Terra Incognita

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I didn’t listen to his words
Even though, in my heart, I heard
When he told me I was a hypocrite
I found myself praying for God’s intervention
For the assurance that I wasn’t being
A hypocrite – a fraud, a phony
I wasn’t someone who was just pretending
To love the Savior, my whole world
The answer to my every anxiousness
The reason for every hope I had ever had

I didn’t listen to him when he said
You’re a hypocrite – You’re not saved
But I found myself searching my heart
Turning over each thought, every motive
All the reasons I had for not giving into
The things he wanted – his desires, his hunger
The greed that was something he flaunted
Even though he accused me, in all truth
It had been his continual urgency for more – more
Urging me to go above and beyond my power
That caused me to disregard his final demands

I didn’t listen to him or his accusations
I soon found my sympathy for him wavering… 
Although I had always been one of his supporters
I found myself – terra incognita now
Unable or unwilling to let go of my plans
To give in to his claims, his pressure, his petitions
I realized, finally, that his complaints, his blaming
Had brought me to the rude awakening…
It was not me at all – He was the double-dealer
Of his allegations… his finger pointing came full circle
To the man he saw in the mirror, in his reflection!





This or That, Vol 13 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
Terra Incognita

August 8, 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 9/4/2022 10:03:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win with this brilliant write, Regina:-). Have a blessed Sunday!
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Date: 8/8/2022 7:28:00 AM
Deep undercurrents of turbulent emotions here, Gina ~ I’d say, follow your faith, follow your heart, in childlike surrender to God, as Jesus or in whatever form He resonates within.
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