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Reaching, stretching out for a touch at the very limits of extension is bound to fail. The tenuous connection is weak, the link is a gossamer veil. To make a real connection you need to get closer.

Thread cast, a lifeline stretched touch, finger to finger, poised for connection. But without grip, can't hold on. Out of reach, connection snaps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/23/2017 6:06:00 AM
Prayer would add more strength to the threads we cast. Great tanka, John.
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