Tenth Cycle

Just twenty days. The mystical Libra will turn rosette boughs into fading auburn… nights combing the breeze colder and quite somber , as if women on bare hilltops await the arrival of men in some far oceans when bleached summer gives way to icicles of endurance so patient and wives, lovers tremble in this anticipation swaying back and forth, balancing the cold clutches of afternoon’s light and destitute clouds wearing mufflers for near or far elegies of snow. It is grippingly delicate: I mean, watching the changing hint of a breeze growing paler. Yet wiser is October rising to chip the glow of studded stars, bit by bit, dying in the gray of grayest sleet to bear the tunes of venial woes. Yet, it is the cycle when courage bides its time for amiable joy. It is the cycle when her adolescent stage transforms ladies into maids-in-waiting... how much longer must the women endure to find an armada of loved ones back home? And the weight of contentment drips, drips in a season fulfilling its own quest. There are no answers; only reflective surrender. Contest: Waiting Sponsor: james rogers 9/10/2015

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Date: 9/22/2015 7:04:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 9/21/2015 4:27:00 PM
Nette, your words are so moving in your descriptive imagery of the wait for Autumn. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/21/2015 2:41:00 AM
And back again with big congrats on ur superb win nette!
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Date: 9/20/2015 4:49:00 PM
Beautifully written Nette, congrats on the win.
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Date: 9/20/2015 1:22:00 PM
Just fantastic, top-notch writing in my opinion. I love..."watching the changing hint of a breeze growing paler" among other phrases. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/20/2015 12:34:00 PM
such wonderful imagery in this deep write nette congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2015 10:19:00 PM
This deep and profound writing stirs my soul my friend. You do this so very well. Image , flow and message all glide along so well. Life and Nature's season blended so well. A7...
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Date: 9/11/2015 6:06:00 PM
Wow, Nette, sensitive and well-written. Admire your imagery!
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Date: 9/10/2015 5:39:00 PM
Wow!! what a lovely write... Your noble write sized my attention through the whole read..... If there is hope their love will return and their feeling of despair shall vanish. Though we propose while God oppose... A well and extreme excellent write.........A.M.
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Date: 9/10/2015 7:00:00 AM
Nette, this is beautiful. The rhythm and imagery and flow. So happy to be reading your poetry again!
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Date: 9/10/2015 2:40:00 AM
U really amaze readers with your superb writing nette! Gl in contest!
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:32:00 PM
The flow of your write depicted a great imagery that intrigue the readers........a well and fabulous piece........A.M.
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Date: 9/9/2015 3:56:00 PM
Filled with both woe and hope as we wait for this month's good tidings of men coming home. Love the line with "armada!" Best of the best poem.
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Date: 9/9/2015 3:37:00 PM
Wow! I was looking for my muse when i clicked on this intense poem of longing. Your use of imagery and metaphors are incredible. October, let not the women wait!
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