Tending To Our Garden

A Rose that’s planted in the rocky earth
that, from the summer sun, is parched and dry,
will seldom bloom to its full beauty’s worth
and soon will sadly whither up and die.

A Rose that’s planted ‘mongst the common weeds
and left untended, sad and on her own,
neglected in a garden full of needs,
will never have her gentle beauty known.

To realize the beauty of the Rose,
a garden must be tended with great care,
and too in life, this thought I now propose,
that like the plot, our lives we must prepare.

For Rose to thrive, our garden we must hoe;
in life, the same is true for Love to grow.


February 14, 2022
Poem of the Week - February 20, 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/22/2022 3:13:00 AM
I enjoy sonnets. Do one or two myself, but not enough. Thanks, John G.
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 3/22/2022 4:38:00 AM
Thanks, Andrew, I've always enjoyed writing sonnets. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Tank care, John
Date: 3/2/2022 2:29:00 AM
How very beautiful John just like the rose. Debx
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 3/2/2022 3:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Deb, I appreciate it. John
Date: 2/27/2022 5:54:00 AM
Masterful use of the metaphoric. Although I have seen some tenacious "roses" bloom and grow in some wildly unmanicured places.
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/27/2022 6:04:00 AM
Thanks, John, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 2/24/2022 12:58:00 AM
This is brilliant John. I love the metaphor in its veracity in knowing without tending, our garden will slowly die as will our love without care. This is so beautiful. Congratulations on having it honored for POTW! I am saving it to my Faves! Blessings xxoo
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/24/2022 5:14:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Connie I'm glad you enjoyed my sonnet. And thank you for saving it to your favorites. Hugs, John
Date: 2/21/2022 12:10:00 PM
Wow! John, These are wise words indeed. Your quote worked very well with your well-written sonnet. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved. Have a nice day-Alexis
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/21/2022 2:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis, I appreciate it. John
Date: 2/20/2022 11:41:00 PM
John, a wonderfully crafted sonnet and beautiful metaphor for tending to love. Excellent choice for POTW, my deepest congratulations on this worthy honor.
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/21/2022 2:35:00 AM
Thanks, John, I appreciate the kind comments. John
Date: 2/20/2022 11:18:00 PM
Wise words, John and so artistically weaved to forge this masterpiece! Congrats on POTW
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/21/2022 2:33:00 AM
Thanks so much, US, I appreciate it. John
Date: 2/20/2022 6:33:00 PM
A *Rose* planted in a beautiful flourishing garden, and it will be tended with care. That is for sure. Your words shine, my dear sweet friend. Congratulations on Poem of the Week. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/20/2022 7:09:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. I always tend my garden with great care and know that the Rose I planted will blossom beautifully. Hugs, John
Date: 2/20/2022 11:30:00 AM
John, beautiful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor ~Constance
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/20/2022 1:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance, I appreciate it. John
Date: 2/20/2022 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. Your "Tending to Our Garden" is a wonderful write/Sonnet. Love It. Have a great/blessed day.....................
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/20/2022 1:30:00 PM
Thank you, Paula, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 2/20/2022 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on POTW, John. Well written with great rhyming and nice choice of an analogy. We must focus on, and put effort into, anything that we want to grow. Especially Love. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/20/2022 1:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Bill, I appreciate it. John
Date: 2/20/2022 6:21:00 AM
John I loved this poem. It reminded me of Christ's parable about the sower and the seed. Loved it from beginning to end and wholeheartedly agree: We must tend the garden if we intend for love to grow. Wonderful!
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/20/2022 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Valerie, I'm glad you enjoyed it. You are the second person to point out that is resembles a parable of Christ. I truly wasn't thinking this as I wrote but perhaps it was there in my subconscious mind guiding me. Have a blessed day, John
Date: 2/20/2022 4:16:00 AM
A beautiful poem and message, congratulations John on POTW!
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/20/2022 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tania, I appreciate it. John
Date: 2/20/2022 1:25:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet and your words are so true, Congratulations on POTW, a well deserved honour. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/20/2022 8:51:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom, this was a complete surprise. I am always humbled when my poems are recognized. John
Date: 2/16/2022 1:13:00 AM
A wondrous oneness of two hearts, John, that you've executed here, further noted is its righteous winning entry, my friend. Pardon my belated expressions as I've found myself in extreme traveling, Aloha~William, Cheers!
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/16/2022 2:41:00 AM
Thanks so much, William, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Glad you enjoyed this one. John
Date: 2/14/2022 7:26:00 PM
Your thoughts hold so much truth, my dear sweet friend. Both a rose and love must be tended with care, to bloom and grow. This is beautiful in every way. I'm holding your words so close to my heart. Happy Valentine's Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/15/2022 2:03:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy, your thoughts and comments are appreciated. Love, like the rose, must be handled with great care. Hugs, John
Date: 2/14/2022 1:21:00 PM
A beautiful poem, John. Everything blossoms when cared for and loved. Happy Valentine's Day. Take care Shirley
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/14/2022 1:37:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Shirley. Happy Valentine's Day. John
Date: 2/14/2022 12:32:00 PM
Truly touched my heart! Tis a metaphor for the spirit. Lonna
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/14/2022 12:59:00 PM
Thank you, Lonna, I'm glad my words touched your heart. John
Date: 2/14/2022 8:15:00 AM
Well said, John. Beautiful poem. Happy Valentines Day :)
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 2/14/2022 9:24:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Happy Valentine's Day ! Hugs, John
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter