Tender Glances Heat

Your mounted passion climbs, and I’m replete 
With glow, to open mouth of eve-song’s  fire 
Inside your breath, as tender glances heat, 
Embracing this and that; lanterns conspire.
Fingers trace our names among hungry stars, 
Deepening blaze of love and quest for time,
And twilight warms one breath to yield afar
Thus, giving way to lip-kissed hours sublime.
We taste the wine of affection with grace
As rising dawn acknowledges our rites, 
For passion is supreme, in dream’s embrace
On heady walks where laughter pure excites.

Until one day, a farewell drowns our lore
When moments strayed as endings, nevermore.



~Inspired by Meatloaf's Song with the theme
on the polarity of passion( expressed through love,
romance and devotion), and the indifference from
such by parting in the end. 

Songs to Poetry of Debbie Guzzi
by nette onclaud)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 9:26 PM
nice win.SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 9:03 AM
Way to go ...Congrats..Sara
Zakerski Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 4:16 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win!
A   Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:43 PM
Hi Nette, Awesome Songs to Poetry ... congrats~ LINDA
Arowolo Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 6:20 PM
Beautiful and Lovely piece,Nette...Well written..Congrats on your win....
Ryerson Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 5:59 AM
Wow!...Another romantic gem written with grace and elegance...Congrats - Tim
Chircop Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 1:08 AM
Congratulations on your deserved second place Nette.An outstanding poem.How are you ? : )
Rain Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 12:11 AM
Oh my , This one takes ones breath away ! Great Job ,,congratulations !! I love this contrast and all the poems I wish to read.
Adams Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 7:58 PM
great write Nette...I like your take on that song...always have loved meatloaf...congrats on your win :)
Guzzi Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 7:26 PM
Congrad's on your verse winning! [fingers trace our names among the hungry stars fav line] Light & Love
Lu Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 4:07 PM
What a passionate piece! Your constructed this poem very well. Nice work! Cindy
Mohammed Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 10:50 PM
Your poem bears the seeds of beauty. Hungry stars, what a ravishing phrase.
Dey Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 10:20 PM
Every lines feed with feelings and i love attraction of love and the depth of pain in your work.Well done....
Beaufort Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 6:13 PM
This makes me think of attractions and all the times I felt attached to someone and then a goodbye came. These feelings are painful ones. You are a gem.
Devnath  Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 11:11 AM
Passionate poem bears to the depth of heart feelings. Nice imagery lovely done. Loved always, bl
Mcdaid Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 5:12 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITTING
Gasun Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 11:45 PM
A very lovely & passionate write this is my dear friend Nette. I love each line and the ending is beautifully sad. I extremely love & enjoyed so much this precious gem of yours. Thanks a lot for sharing! Have a blessed weekend to you and your love ones! love much, Leonora
Sivey Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 7:47 PM
This is such a tenderhearted and sensual write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this evening, such awesome insight you have within life and love Nette! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 5:30 PM
Great sonnet..If for a contest, reads like winning material..Passion you express so well..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that you stopped by with you encouraging comments..Sara
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 3:37 PM
- Thank you for a beautiful and soft poem that pleases one's heart. - Have a nice weekend my friend Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 3:15 PM
This goes on my favorites list. What a beautiful, sensual poem you've written. Somehow the sad ending makes it all the more tender... jack
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 2:25 PM
Sentimental and romantic..Ow gee that farewell..So sad but how beautiful ..Lovely
Manassian Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 1:45 PM
Intensely sensual, my dear....beautiful.....WOW!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 1:32 PM
PENNED REALLY A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE
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