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Tender and Sweet Revised

Tender and sweet was my first date. My inocence brought awkwardness, to this fait. Alone, with my friends all gone in his car for the first time, I blush at a glance at a little romance as he brushed his hand against mine. We were meeting our friends at the movies in the mall. once we were there it was less awkward after all. when we arrived the girls all gathered in innocently joking about our first dates how they began. The fellows got tickets, popcorn and drinks, while the girls all gossiped by the bathroom sinks. We giggled and blushed , and giggled some more. We gathered our emotions as we walked through the door. My date was so nice, Norman, he was a dear. He stretched out his arm and held me near. As the movie went on, they were playing a song the movie was "Pretty in Pink". Then He held my hand it was positively grand as we walk back out from our seats. When he took me home I was nervously blushed, as I thanked him for the nice date. Then he leaned in, as I was looking at him. He hugged me and then kissed my cheek. Ahhhh..Tender and Sweet memories of yesteryear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/16/2011 7:56:00 AM
Gosh, so few guys these days would simply kiss your cheek and be so sweet. Nice story. I take it this was the 8o's! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/15/2011 3:41:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, treasa
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Treasa Jarvis
Date: 7/15/2011 10:36:00 PM
Thank you Dr.Ram..God bless..
Date: 7/15/2011 1:58:00 PM
Congrats Treasa on your super second place win in first date with this dynamic delight ..luv..enjoy..
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Treasa Jarvis
Date: 7/15/2011 10:34:00 PM
Thank you Linda God Bless:)
Date: 7/15/2011 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Treasa. Love, Carol
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Treasa Jarvis
Date: 7/15/2011 10:34:00 PM
thank you Carol for this great win..You are such an encourager..God bless you my friend.

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