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Ten Word Obituary

They found my neighbor today
sitting in his chair, seeping
into the fabric. The smell-
rancid fat, a tallowy 
rind of meat. 

The cleaners take days.
Boy George warbles
through the walls. 
Buckets sloshed
and carted to the halls.

No one collects his things.
No one cries.
A ten word
obituary:

Mr. Campbell died
and all anyone noticed
was the 
smell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/21/2016 3:54:00 PM
Misty, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 1/13/2015 9:02:00 PM
Found this poem to be like an electrical shock. Poor Mr. Campbell, but even more so, his neighbors.
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