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Ten Villanelles- Eighth

8 Who can even understand these words of insanity I write with the feeling I'm the only one who will care Considerations not made in selfishness or vanity I look for some hope, but there is nothing left to see No more special moments will we be able to share Who can even understand these words of insanity I search for any type of sign, but all I found was me Alone with this tremendous burden I have to bear Considerations not made in selfishness or vanity Sadly I'm usually the one causing all this calamity Forgetting to tell myself at the time I should beware Who can even understand these words of insanity The high tide pushes on, a vast sea of humanity Yet I remain unable to move, stranded in nowhere Considerations not made in selfishness or vanity Having happiness doesn't always mean being free To the normal train of thought, I will never compare Who can even understand these words of insanity Considerations not made in selfishness or vanity

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Date: 12/12/2013 3:28:00 PM
Man..can't stress how much I can relate to this one. I'm glad you have an outlet - not the best to hold these feelings in. You seem like a really sweet person. And your poetry shows how thoughtful you are. This one is my favorite so far. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/12/2013 4:05:00 PM
Thanks for reading so much, I think you have discerned correctly reading my work, and I seem to find an error in everyone lol, so I'm glad you've been reading. If you see a type or anything, please let me know. BY reading you'd think I really don't care lol, but I do, wondering how long these are here with these errors.

Book: Shattered Sighs