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Ten Things That Bring a Smile

I made a pile, a list of things The things that make me smile To narrow down these many things...it took me quite awhile But I realize now...I tried too hard... If I had only looked around There are little things that cross my day... That's where the smiles are found.... So if choosing ten, well then...., ...perhaps I'll just begin... Amazing me,... it seems to be...that joy can be found in simple things..... The wave from a neighbor over a white picket rail The first sunny day, after a long winter's spell A wood pecker's drum, or the skylark that sings The berries I picked, overflowing the pail Sweet soapy fragrance, and my grandson's smile straight from his bath....all wrapped in a towel Rays of yellow sunlight shining on the kitchen floor A sleeping calico cat...curled, snug by the door Books or photographs... A sweet memory to recall of those who loved me best...when I was very small Oh I could go on....I haven't mentioned them all But perhaps you get the idea.....I smile....I smile.....I smile....!!!!

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Date: 3/13/2013 8:41:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Well done. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/10/2013 8:55:00 AM
Congrats on such a wonderful win!
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Date: 3/9/2013 7:49:00 PM
Carrie. thank you for the nice and simple smile :-) "CONGRATULATIONS!" and goodnight xox...PD
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Date: 6/21/2011 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Adeleke's "Top Ten" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/19/2011 3:49:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of adeleke, Carrie
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Date: 6/19/2011 2:12:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on this fantastic win for a wonderful write in the top ten contest.. another awesome creation my friend..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 6/19/2011 9:46:00 AM
I'm grateful for your support, congrats on your 6th place. Luv, Ade
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Date: 9/7/2010 7:39:00 AM
I always enjoyed reading your poetry. Like this one, your poems flow so elegantly with ease, and the thoughts provoked leave the reader feeling what the speaker is feeling. You are a very successful writer. This poem made me smile, as most of your poems do.
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Date: 8/5/2010 3:21:00 PM
just wonderful Carrie..as per usual. Congratulations to you .
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie....you know joy!
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Date: 8/3/2010 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie! from the heart and overflowing with smile and love....simply b'ful.
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Date: 8/1/2010 6:14:00 PM
Awesome , awesome, awesome. Congatulations, Carrie! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/27/2010 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Joe Flach's contest "Top 10". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:02:00 AM
congrats on the big number ONE!!
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Date: 7/25/2010 3:27:00 PM
Carrie, I absolutely loved this poem! Great take on the theme. Very creative. Easy to read. Easy to understand. Nice flow, good rhyme. I also liked the variety in the style/format and the flow from one to another. And, although I am not usually influenced by this, I thought the presentation and indentation contributed to the appeal of this write. Thank you for sharing it with me in my contest. Joe
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Date: 7/24/2010 9:30:00 AM
Great write and congrats on your 1st place win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 7/24/2010 8:59:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your big number one first place for the Top Ten contest .. a lovely write expressing the things most important to u.. enjoy your top spot in the winner circle.. with luv..
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Date: 7/24/2010 6:46:00 AM
Congrats, Carrie on 1st Place. Well deserved. Truely outstanding write. Many Kudos to you. You and yours have a really great weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/24/2010 5:16:00 AM
There she is the #1 gal again!!! Light & Love poetess!
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Date: 7/23/2010 11:36:00 PM
Wow !!!!!!!!!!! This one is perfectly deserving one dear!!!!! You kept life and light into unknowing happiness giving things!!!!!!! Great one!!! congratulations!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!!
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Date: 7/15/2010 11:51:00 AM
Your poem here puts a smile on my face and brightens my day! It's the little special moments throughout our day that really count. Love, Susan
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:56:00 PM
What a great list of things that make you smile, Carrie. Wonderful images as well. Best wishes in Joe's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:39:00 AM
Hi Carrie, I enjoyed your list very much. You're so right that simple things can bring so much happiness, if only we take the time to notice and appreciate them. Best of luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/12/2010 2:46:00 PM
Simple things do make my heart smile,Carrie. .Feeling you smiling make me smile too,life is beautiful,so your precious words. .C :)
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Date: 7/12/2010 12:05:00 PM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
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