Ten Things That Bring a Smile

I made a pile, a list of things 
   The things that make me smile
       To narrow down these many things...it took me quite awhile
              But I realize now...I tried too hard...
                  If I had only looked around
                    There are little things that cross my day... 
                       That's where the smiles are found....

So if choosing ten, 
      well then....,
         ...perhaps I'll just begin...

Amazing me,... it seems to be...that joy can be found in simple things.....

                       The wave from a neighbor
                       over a white picket rail

                       The first sunny day, after a long winter's spell

                       A wood pecker's drum, or the skylark that sings

                       The berries I picked, overflowing the pail

                       Sweet soapy fragrance, and my grandson's smile
                       straight from his bath....all wrapped in a towel

                       Rays of yellow sunlight
                       shining on the kitchen floor

                       A sleeping calico cat...curled, snug by the door

                      Books or photographs...

                      A sweet memory to recall
                      of those who loved me best...when I was very small

Oh I could go on....I haven't mentioned them all

But perhaps you get the idea.....I smile....I smile.....I smile....!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 8:41 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Well done. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Eastman Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Congrats on such a wonderful win!
A   Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 7:49 PM
Carrie. thank you for the nice and simple smile :-) "CONGRATULATIONS!" and goodnight xox...PD
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on your win Adeleke's "Top Ten" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 3:49 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of adeleke, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Congrats Carrie on this fantastic win for a wonderful write in the top ten contest.. another awesome creation my friend..enjoy with luv..
Adeite Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 9:46 AM
I'm grateful for your support, congrats on your 6th place. Luv, Ade
M Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 7:39 AM
I always enjoyed reading your poetry. Like this one, your poems flow so elegantly with ease, and the thoughts provoked leave the reader feeling what the speaker is feeling. You are a very successful writer. This poem made me smile, as most of your poems do.
Dufresne Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 3:21 PM
just wonderful Carrie..as per usual. Congratulations to you .
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations Carrie....you know joy!
Nandy Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations Carrie! from the heart and overflowing with smile and love....simply b'ful.
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 6:14 PM
Awesome , awesome, awesome. Congatulations, Carrie! Luv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Joe Flach's contest "Top 10". Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 8:02 AM
congrats on the big number ONE!!
Flach Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 3:27 PM
Carrie, I absolutely loved this poem! Great take on the theme. Very creative. Easy to read. Easy to understand. Nice flow, good rhyme. I also liked the variety in the style/format and the flow from one to another. And, although I am not usually influenced by this, I thought the presentation and indentation contributed to the appeal of this write. Thank you for sharing it with me in my contest. Joe
Cwiak Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Great write and congrats on your 1st place win in the contest. Dan C
Sweetheart Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 8:59 AM
Congrats Carrie on your big number one first place for the Top Ten contest .. a lovely write expressing the things most important to u.. enjoy your top spot in the winner circle.. with luv..
Taylor Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 6:46 AM
Congrats, Carrie on 1st Place. Well deserved. Truely outstanding write. Many Kudos to you. You and yours have a really great weekend. xxxRalph
Guzzi Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 5:16 AM
There she is the #1 gal again!!! Light & Love poetess!
Thaker Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 11:36 PM
Wow !!!!!!!!!!! This one is perfectly deserving one dear!!!!! You kept life and light into unknowing happiness giving things!!!!!!! Great one!!! congratulations!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!!
Mills Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 11:51 AM
Your poem here puts a smile on my face and brightens my day! It's the little special moments throughout our day that really count. Love, Susan
Devonshire Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 6:56 PM
What a great list of things that make you smile, Carrie. Wonderful images as well. Best wishes in Joe's contest! Love, Carolyn
Tideswell Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Hi Carrie, I enjoyed your list very much. You're so right that simple things can bring so much happiness, if only we take the time to notice and appreciate them. Best of luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
Bloomsfield Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 2:46 PM
Simple things do make my heart smile,Carrie. .Feeling you smiling make me smile too,life is beautiful,so your precious words. .C :)
Rich Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 12:05 PM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
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