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Ten things I like about her---

Ten Things I Like About Her ... # 10 - Now number ten is neither here nor there It can be concluded that number ten, an illusion Eluded to confusion, a pigeon to decision A scalpel to precision, separate from any reason Affected only if to reason As if so, silent- a wait So alone in a line Standing broken in time Almost a ticking rewind Like darkness closing in or Taking apart together Was only to- get –her As so the silence of wait A mere illusion, to only mirror the confusion Left standing but ones conclusion Affected by reason- So the sum of it all Was less all of its sum A Vision Quest So twisted these nerves in my spine But so focused was her in my mind Left standing - I can’t miss, cuz number ten says – " I liked the way she KISSED"

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Date: 5/18/2015 1:34:00 PM
Christian, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Christian Alexander
Date: 7/27/2015 12:14:00 AM
thank you, Doll