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Ten Things I Like About Her---

Ten Things I Like About Her ...

# 10 - Now number ten is neither here nor there
It can be concluded that number ten, an illusion
 Eluded to confusion, a pigeon to decision
A scalpel to precision, separate from any reason
 Affected only if to reason
 As if so, silent- a wait
 So alone in a line
 Standing broken in time
 Almost a ticking rewind
 Like darkness closing in or
 Taking apart together
 Was only to- get –her
 As so the silence of wait
 A mere illusion, to only mirror the confusion
 Left standing but ones conclusion
 Affected by reason- So the sum of it all
 Was less all of its sum
 A Vision Quest
 So twisted these nerves in my spine
 But so focused was her in my mind
 Left standing - I can’t miss, cuz number ten says –
   " I liked the way she KISSED"

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Date: 5/18/2015 1:34:00 PM
Christian, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Christian Alexander
Date: 7/27/2015 12:14:00 AM
thank you, Doll

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