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Ten

Way back then when I was just ten My brain was purely devil's den All sorts of studies - made me ill Opened books were my sleeping pills Started looking at girls - through pane Way back then when I was just ten From the elder sis of my friend Got first love letter - 'was refrained Playing football was my passion Wear bell bottom - was the fashion Way back then when I was just ten There was Phantom and no Ben Ten First fight with peers, first taste of blood First taste of kiss on my taste bud I used to live - in a bye lane Way back then when I was just ten 26.01.16

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 2/20/2016 9:02:00 AM

Congratulations Anindya: A beautiful poem down memory lane.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/20/2016 11:11:00 PM

Thanks a lot Ralph. Warm regards, Bobby

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/18/2016 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/18/2016 9:55:00 PM

Thanks a lot Susan. Hugs, Bobby

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 2:07:00 AM

anytime, XOX. LINDA

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/18/2016 9:54:00 PM

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/17/2016 9:26:00 AM

Bobby, Congratulations on your nice win. LINDA

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/17/2016 9:35:00 PM

Thank you so much, Linda. XOXO, Bobby

Lin Lane

Date: 2/17/2016 5:57:00 AM

Well done, Bobby. Congratulations with this one.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/17/2016 9:34:00 PM

Thanks a lot Lin. Hugs, Bobby

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/16/2016 10:01:00 PM

Congratulations you little devil, and thank you for sharing your memories with us, Bless your memories and Peace:)

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/17/2016 5:42:00 AM

LOL! Thanks a lot for the compliment. I was so. Happy to learn that you have enjoyed my humble write. Here at Soup, you people are truly wonderful and enjoying your company. Love & hugs, Bobby

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/16/2016 9:01:00 PM

Some nice memories you've recalled and shared here... Congrats on a win with this great poem! Thanks for entering :)

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/16/2016 11:19:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Kelly. Your poem on this theme is truly exceptional. Happy to know that you liked my devilish Quatern. Love and hugs, Bobby

Kash Poet

Date: 2/13/2016 10:57:00 PM

Lovely poem!Very good flow.Khub bhalo laglo.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/13/2016 11:28:00 PM

Osonkhyo dhonyobad. Ek rash ovinondan o ushnota kobir jonyo. This is my first attempt to write a Quatern. Happy valentine, Bobby