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Tempting Tower

From the pulled-sugar tux
To the pressed-sugar gown,
The sweet candy couple
Will paint the cake town!

From their sugary heads
To their saccharine shoes,
They're the topmost of all
To spread the good news.

They've layers of goodness
Stacked under their feet,
First, a moistened red velvet
Of chocolatey sweet ...

Below that, two inches
Of soft coconut cream,
That rests on two layers
Of strawberry dream!

A tangy, tart lemon cake
Is what lays beneath,
Then almond vanilla
Circles all like a wreath.

Two inches of spice cake
Then gives that support,
And under that, still,
Is a rich German torte.

The base of Cake Mountain,
This pyramid pleasure,
Is double-fudge marble,
A sweet, scrumptious treasure!

But it all looks the same -
Frosted art, to the eyes,
With all the fun layers
As a wedding surprise!

But the rose-gilded sides
All coated with frosting,
Aren't nearly as steep
As what it's all costing!

But don't worry, each inch
Of mouth-watering ice,
Is confection perfection,
And well worth the price.

But if you're still craving
The sweet stuff that's inside,
Seems the groom craves that, too,
When he looks ...

At the bride!

** 2nd Place in the "Relishing Cake Poetry Contest", Julia Ward, Sponsor. **
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 12:01 AM
Mouth watering...and tempting!! :D Well done. Congrats.
Barden Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 2:03 AM
Thank you very much, Sunita ... that's sweet of you! :-)
Roberts Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 3:47 PM
Very SWEET, congrats
Barden Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 2:02 AM
Thanks, Donna!
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Terrific write Greg, congratulations...
Barden Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 2:02 AM
Thank you very much, Charlie!
Burch Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations Greg! Well done hugs deb
Barden Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 2:01 AM
So sweet of you ... thanks, Deb! :-)
Chansarkar Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 8:24 AM
The cake an the poem are delectable,congrats!
Barden Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 2:01 AM
Thank you very much, Sara! :-)
Eldridge Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 6:56 PM
Nice! Congrats !
Barden Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 2:00 AM
Thanks, Jack!
Poteet Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 6:28 PM
Delicious to dream of eating such delicacies, a surprise with each layer. Congratulations on your fine theme entry and excellent poem, not to mention the award you took. Enjoyable read.
Barden Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 2:00 AM
Thank you very much, RAP - very kind of you!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 6:00 AM
Such a tasty wedding cake and an aww moment at the end! Congrats 7
Barden Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 1:59 AM
Thank you very much, Kim!! :-)
Ward Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 2:16 AM
All those calories! Thank you for your entertaining entry giving you second place in my contest. Congratulations!
Ward Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 4:26 AM
You're very welcome. I particularly like "The sweet candy couple // Will paint the cake town!".
Barden Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 2:38 AM
Thank you so very kindly, Julia - this started my day with a big smile, and I am honored to be mentioned in such a great group of poets. Blessings to you and yours, and all those here who have been so kind and encouraging to me! - Greg
Breedt Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 8:13 AM
When you write about burgers or cake I just get hungry. I tried to comment on your kitty one too but the gremlins wouldnt let me
Barden Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 4:43 PM
lol - thanks, buddy ... I guess if it makes you hungry I must be doing something right! Thanks for the kind words, Jannie, and for dealing with those nasty gremlins, ha! Blessings, Friend. :)
Wanter Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Wow! Let 'em eat cake!
Barden Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 1:25 PM
Thanks so much, SW - so glad you enjoyed it! I had fun with this one. :)
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