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From the pulled-sugar tux To the pressed-sugar gown, The sweet candy couple Will paint the cake town! From their sugary heads To their saccharine shoes, They're the topmost of all To spread the good news. They've layers of goodness Stacked under their feet, First, a moistened red velvet Of chocolatey sweet ... Below that, two inches Of soft coconut cream, That rests on two layers Of strawberry dream! A tangy, tart lemon cake Is what lays beneath, Then almond vanilla Circles all like a wreath. Two inches of spice cake Then gives that support, And under that, still, Is a rich German torte. The base of Cake Mountain, This pyramid pleasure, Is double-fudge marble, A sweet, scrumptious treasure! But it all looks the same - Frosted art, to the eyes, With all the fun layers As a wedding surprise! But the rose-gilded sides All coated with frosting, Aren't nearly as steep As what it's all costing! But don't worry, each inch Of mouth-watering ice, Is confection perfection, And well worth the price. But if you're still craving The sweet stuff that's inside, Seems the groom craves that, too, When he looks ... At the bride! ** 2nd Place in the "Relishing Cake Poetry Contest", Julia Ward, Sponsor. **

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Date: 3/19/2017 12:01:00 AM
Mouth watering...and tempting!! :D Well done. Congrats.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 2:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sunita ... that's sweet of you! :-)
Date: 3/15/2017 3:47:00 PM
Very SWEET, congrats
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 2:02:00 AM
Thanks, Donna!
Date: 3/11/2017 9:48:00 AM
Terrific write Greg, congratulations...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 2:02:00 AM
Thank you very much, Charlie!
Date: 3/8/2017 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations Greg! Well done hugs deb
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 2:01:00 AM
So sweet of you ... thanks, Deb! :-)
Date: 3/8/2017 8:24:00 AM
The cake an the poem are delectable,congrats!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 2:01:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara! :-)
Date: 3/7/2017 6:56:00 PM
Nice! Congrats !
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 2:00:00 AM
Thanks, Jack!
Date: 3/7/2017 6:28:00 PM
Delicious to dream of eating such delicacies, a surprise with each layer. Congratulations on your fine theme entry and excellent poem, not to mention the award you took. Enjoyable read.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 2:00:00 AM
Thank you very much, RAP - very kind of you!
Date: 3/7/2017 6:00:00 AM
Such a tasty wedding cake and an aww moment at the end! Congrats 7
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 1:59:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim!! :-)
Date: 3/7/2017 2:16:00 AM
All those calories! Thank you for your entertaining entry giving you second place in my contest. Congratulations!
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Julia Ward
Date: 3/7/2017 4:26:00 AM
You're very welcome. I particularly like "The sweet candy couple // Will paint the cake town!".
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2017 2:38:00 AM
Thank you so very kindly, Julia - this started my day with a big smile, and I am honored to be mentioned in such a great group of poets. Blessings to you and yours, and all those here who have been so kind and encouraging to me! - Greg
Date: 2/26/2017 8:13:00 AM
When you write about burgers or cake I just get hungry. I tried to comment on your kitty one too but the gremlins wouldnt let me
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/26/2017 4:43:00 PM
lol - thanks, buddy ... I guess if it makes you hungry I must be doing something right! Thanks for the kind words, Jannie, and for dealing with those nasty gremlins, ha! Blessings, Friend. :)
Date: 2/14/2017 12:00:00 PM
Wow! Let 'em eat cake!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/14/2017 1:25:00 PM
Thanks so much, SW - so glad you enjoyed it! I had fun with this one. :)

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