Temptation Itches On All Living Things

Temptation Itches On All Living Things

Temptation itches on all living things
often nobody knows just how it stings,
not the icky-glues in its sticky pastes
nor the rotten fruits in its wasted wastes.

She the vixen nobody could resist
her vanishing pleasures - elusive mists,
long legs descend from heavenly skies
later, such dark pains in lamented cries.

Victim once thought to be heavenly bound
lost, voiceless, no understandable sound,
finds temptress, sexy wares designed to win
she that siren alluring to all men.

You scratch that itch, risking your own peril,
finding wounds that can never be sterile!

12-15- 2016


For Daniel Turner's , What Was I Thinking,  Contest
15 December 2016

Last verse inspiration, from his poem "Between the Lines

Couplet sonnet
Rhyme Scheme:  a a – b b – c c – d d – e e – f f – g g
10 syllables each line.
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Fleming Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 8:47 AM
The sonnet is a difficult subject to successfully undertake; I would have to say you have made a pretty good fist of it, Robert - Well done! My very best regards as always. :) john
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Excellent poem, Robert. The imagery and message are both outstanding and relevant. Good advice, don't scratch that itch. Love this poem. A 7 for sure. Love and peace to you.
May Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 2:48 PM
The stings of temptation are described with great poetic flair.... ...Congratulations on your win
A   Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 12:49 PM
WOW, Robert, that tells a story of one who falls very easily to temptation, some things we can't resist, the eye is eviler than the heart... Love it, and glad to be back. LINDA
Pennell  Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 12:23 PM
great sonnet I can see its a fave form read it out loud worked great for me well done stephen
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 11:02 AM
YOur poem is very creative, Robert. I think maybe the judge was looking for poems that were a bit surreal like his own. You did well to copy his style and I congratulate you for your awesome win!
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Wow, I love what you did with that line, Robert...a most creative warning for sure! Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
Warrior Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Congrats!!! Robert...superbly done my friend...a twitch for the itch lol...god bless...^WW^
Kasperyan Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 3:54 AM
Dear Lord now you are making ME itch :-) Congratulations though, for a beautifully written piece.
Canerdy Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Very imaginative, Robert--a 7 for sure! I tried this one--couldn't move with it. Congrats on your win! Janice
Roper Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Very good, Robert, I love the way you used the descriptive words to make a point. Congratulations on your win... :) . Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays Hugs Eve
Vinson Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Robert, so well done! : ) And so tough not to scratch that itch....
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 6:11 PM
Excellent, excellent my friend! You took his line and ran with it Robert! Congratulations on this winning poem...one of my faves of the bunch! 7 ; )
Turner Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Congratulations Robert on your placement in my contest. i love where your muse went with the silly topic. A well written sonnet. Thank you for your participation.
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 7:38 PM
I love this one, Robert! Reads like a winner to me! Good luck my friend!
Y. Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 6:24 PM
Hi Robert, I really enjoyed your take on the contest theme. Good rhymes and content. This packed a powerful punch. The point that you're making is clear. "Temptation " doesn't not discriminate. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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