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Temptation

All things can tempt me. Happiness may tempt Love without dominance and age exempt. A natural accord; young as I was! Mine prudent nature knowing what may cause. Tomorrow came and went whilst purpose changed Amongst the laughter life adverse, estranged. Now, impulse of what's proper to consume. Temptation left not a delicate bloom. A final push, there's feeble resistance Weaken by even an immense distance. 2/23/2020

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Date: 2/28/2020 11:30:00 AM
The devils delight is to tempt us - and often we give in, but He is always there if we turn out back to temptation, and ask for His help , very difficult. Cleverly crafted dear Eve, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/25/2020 5:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this truth, poetically expressed. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently judged contest. God bless you.
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Date: 2/23/2020 11:40:00 PM
A final push, there's feeble resistance..That is what a temptation is.. Great entry in the contest Eve.. Good luck..
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Date: 2/23/2020 9:35:00 PM
Nicely done, Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/23/2020 9:42:00 PM
Thank you , Line, that means a lot from you.

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