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Temple of the Gods-Palindrome

Temple of the Gods Within the realities, unseen deified admits a parallel preen A shielded smokescreen for their succus is made unclean In the matriarchal machine a throne tallat for the Queen A calumnious convene in illusions that dered and demean The fallen Angels level in their banishing bedaubed bedevil In ruins ravaging, they revel a tenacious tenet of their temple For their mendacious meddle we are the reifier of our vessel We wilfully wrestle and retire in our denned deceived nestle We are the many among the few evitative as we quietly ensue For we must rise and renew all sexes seduced within their skew Time to be trusted and true him or her who sees the veils thru Constructs that construe dimensional drifts solos in the goo. A Palindrome is a word or phrase which reads the same backwards as forwards, such as madam deified – past tense of "to deify", meaning to consider as a god succus – any of various liquids excreted by animals or plants tallat--A loft. dered – past tense of "to dere", an archaic word meaning to harm level – various common meanings tenet – a belief or principle reifier – someone who reifies (considers an abstract concept to be real) denned – past tense of to den, meaning to live in a den evitative – a grammatical case indicating fear or aversion. sexes – plural of sex sees – third-person present tense of ‘to see’ solos – plural of solo May.08.2018 Palindromes Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 5/12/2018 12:32:00 PM
My friend, what a beautiful, brilliant, clever piece you have penned in this form. This form was far too challenging for me to even try, but you made it seem so simple and smooth flowing; and on top of that you used some pretty awesome rhyming! I am confident that it will do very well in the contest! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/9/2018 7:10:00 PM
Well WW, this time I bow to you.I have not even heard of this form, but you my friend would take any form of poetry and make it a Masterpiece. WINNER all over this awesome write. Congratulations in advance....Maria :)
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Date: 5/9/2018 4:04:00 PM
Well if I were running the contest, I would drive as fast as I can in my "Racecar" and flag you the winner. Excellent WW, best of luck!
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Date: 5/9/2018 8:13:00 AM
Hello WW, This one is a truly wondrous rhyme in every respect!! The usage of the Palindromes works extraordinarily well here and is reflective of a higher degree of poetic precision, and instantly evokes more interest from the reader. Outstanding Work!! A FAVE TOO!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. Good Luck in the Contest!!)
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Date: 5/9/2018 6:27:00 AM
Excellent and cleverly written. Enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/8/2018 5:04:00 PM
It requires much skill to write one of these, I am not that disciplined, but I can see you have a real talent for it. I have enjoyed your poem WW,
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Date: 5/8/2018 11:08:00 AM
Well done, ^WW^, I always have a difficult time to place word in a poem.. luck in the contest .. hugs
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Date: 5/8/2018 10:53:00 AM
I read your beauty over and over! A poet challenging both his creative adet and the reader! You got my attention Winged Warrior. A pleasure to read your write. The best of luck in the contest. Stay bright and blessed.
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Date: 5/8/2018 9:23:00 AM
Wow WW. This is an amazing poem and you did it perfectly for the contest! :)
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Date: 5/8/2018 7:23:00 AM
Great description in rhyming words in your usual expert style..I think you aced this contest..good luck WW!
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