Michael Dom Poet Sijo

Temple of Life

You are my obsidian dream and I will quarry your love
In the Temples of Oblivion, reveal your secrets to me!
Let us strike a mortal bargain to smite the dull frame of night.








Michael Dom
Sijo in a temple
created 12/12/13 - resurrected 08/05/14

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Funom Makama April 14, 2015 at 11:41 AM More than just words and greatly significant lines for a wonderful day as this. I am happy to stop by. Great write and keep it up because I will still come knocking at the door of your wonderful pages.

Thomas Martin April 7, 2015 at 10:14 PM Interesting, Michael. I feel the depth!

Constance La France March 25, 2015 at 9:41 AM Michael, beautifully written, a 7 rating and thanks for visiting my poem, rest now. . .

Richard Lamoureux January 7, 2015 at 7:05 PM This is really, really good!

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2014 at 9:38 PM this is outstanding. i see why Nette chose it high. Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick May 15, 2014 at 8:07 AM Enjoyed reading your creative work this morn..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Elaine George May 15, 2014 at 5:14 AM YOU HAVE A STYLE AND FLAIR THAT IS UNIQUE TO YOU. I AGREE WITH DAVE WOOD. ...AWESOME WRITE! Lainie

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 14, 2014 at 2:36 AM CONGRATULATIONS on the awesome win.. :) i love the last line Michael.. :) , GBU, olive Michael Dom May 14, 2014 at 7:24 AM Hi Olive, glad you enjoy this sijo and thanks for appreciating that last line, which was a challenge to put together just right.

Poet Destroyer A May 13, 2014 at 1:26 PM HI MICHAEL , Congratulations, in NETTE's, "SIJO IN A TEMPLE " awesome contest. <3 Love * LINDA Michael Dom May 14, 2014 at 7:22 AM Linda, :-)

Nette Onclaud May 13, 2014 at 12:06 PM what a masterful stroke from your pen; very mysterious, michael... congrats on your top slot in my contest.. huggs Michael Dom May 14, 2014 at 7:22 AM nette, thank you for the fine competition. I really enjoy writing sijo, like a sonnet, only shorter.

Casarah Nance May 13, 2014 at 7:48 AM Wonderful, Well done. Grats on first place :) Michael Dom May 14, 2014 at 7:20 AM Thanks for stopping by, Casarah, and for the grats.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 13, 2014 at 5:48 AM Wow a great sijo here ! loved this one,,congrats on big win Michael ! Michael Dom May 14, 2014 at 7:19 AM Upma, thank you for your compliment :-)

Dr.Ram Mehta May 12, 2014 at 8:56 PM Impressive imagery..Congratulations on the win, Michael Michael Dom May 13, 2014 at 3:08 AM Thanks Dr Mehta, much appreciate your visit.

Jake Ponce May 12, 2014 at 6:40 PM Congratulations on the brilliant win, Michael! Like the other 1st place Sijo, this one is also rockin' hard! Excellent! Michael Dom May 13, 2014 at 3:05 AM Much appreciate your visit Jake Ponce.

Verlena S. Walker May 12, 2014 at 4:24 PM Nice Micheal. Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena Michael Dom May 14, 2014 at 7:15 AM Hey Verlana, thank you.

Carrie Richards May 12, 2014 at 2:19 PM Oh, ..my...so beautiful is this! Congrats to you on your win!! Michael Dom May 13, 2014 at 3:01 AM Thanks Carrie, eye of the beholder and back at you for your sijo too.

Lisa Lee May 12, 2014 at 1:48 PM Huge congratulations, Michael! Well done! Michael Dom May 13, 2014 at 2:57 AM Equally large thanks to you, Lisa Lee.

Paul Callus May 11, 2014 at 2:43 PM This is strong and beautiful; expect it to do well in contest. gl // paul Paul Callus May 12, 2014 at 2:49 PM ...back again with congratulations!