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For the Tempest Poetry Contest of Robert James Liguori

Tempestuous

Nature’s most fearsome orchestration
of sights, sounds and terrific movements
can feel like the very air we breathe
is being turned against us
as it manifests itself 
in many forms of storms.

When earth becomes ungrounded,
it quakes inside its ancient bones,
filling souls with dread
as Mother Nature joins in,
birthing storm quakes  
in large bodies of water.

As water fills earth’s veins,
it’s as if the planet bleeds from oceanic wounds,
which tumble over anything and anyone
standing in Mother Nature’s path,
showing those wounds as tsunamis.

Under certain conditions,
Mother Nature unleashes her fickle fury
as hurricanes that sweep over
coastal areas,
and in many other parts of the world,
tornadoes touch down just as unpredictably,
ravaging homes and entire cities,
whirling violently over the land -
claiming innocent lives in the wake
of great devastation.

Throughout all history,
Mother Nature, along with earth,
has exhibited her capricious disposition,
often at the most random of places and times.
Recently, however, humans have contributed
more and more to their own demise
as Mother Nature takes a deep breath
and then vehemently
exhales.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dronsfield Avatar
February 14, 2026 at 3:09 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this lovely piece!!
Liguori Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 5:01 AM
Congrats on fifth.
Kerr Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 4:10 AM
Hearfelt and sincere congratulations on your well deserved success, Andrea, with this outstanding free verse, Howard
Dronsfield Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 6:06 PM
A wonderful poem! The harsh truth about Mother Nature's wrath! Congratulations!!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 11:06 AM
None of us are safe from the storm! Great imagery..wow! Congrats!
Hind Avatar
January 21, 2026 at 6:23 PM
We all need to come together, and work like you're saying here to heal Mother Nature. <3
Godwin Avatar
January 21, 2026 at 9:36 AM
Beautiful and painful
May Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 9:17 AM
The many ways Mother Nature lets her power known, Very nicely penned
Poet Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 4:30 AM
This piece flows like a tapestry of thought, woven with threads of vivid imagery and a heartfelt call to understanding, resonating with the essence of our shared humanity. I wish you the very best, dear Andrea, with heartfelt gratitude for your excellent placement in your last contest.
DiMino Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 3:34 AM
Quite a read! We are indeed causing much of our own pain and suffering, the way we feel, think therefore will our acts. We are tied to the hip of Nature -- Nature taking lead from our emotions. It is not so far fetched to imagine, Earth, Nature, all living creatures as part of the same conscious creation. Life ebbs and flows in the same sea or body of God movement. Separation is sleep.
Kerr Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 12:16 AM
This is an extraordinary free verse underpinned by apt intelligent imagery and a plausible narrative plea. The very best to you, Andrea, with this. I’m most grateful for your slants on my story Hope Springs Eternal, Howard
Goldsmith Avatar
January 18, 2026 at 11:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Tempestuous" write. Mother Nature has a life of her own. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a lovely day/week writing away................
Cunningham Avatar
January 18, 2026 at 10:38 AM
Mother nature will do as she pleases and will put right everything that mankind has ruined, Thought provoking verse Andrea. Tom
Narain Avatar
January 18, 2026 at 9:43 AM
Great poem with dept and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Rolland Avatar
January 18, 2026 at 3:05 AM
nice and deep poetry, well written, enjoyed have a sweet sunday
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