Constance La France Poet Kimo

Tempest

 
undulating waves rise and fall, drenching
whirlwind twister destroys life . . .
flames blaze in the night
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June 8, 2013

Poetry/Kimo/tempest
Copyright Protected, ID 06-484-261-13
All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, Writer Wannabe
sponsor, Debbie Guzzi, HM, Judged06/11/2013

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Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2013 at 10:16 AM Constance, I am just now seeing that this one won in Deb's contest. Big belated congrats to you on a very deserved win. Hope you are ok. Haven't seen a new poem from you in a while.

Debbie Guzzi June 11, 2013 at 7:41 PM I loved the word undulating! Three strong images yet unconnected each one could make a whole kimo or haiku. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick June 11, 2013 at 6:56 PM I like that you combined all three in one great piece. congrats. BG

Russell Sivey June 9, 2013 at 2:45 PM Wow, this is an impressive write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this powerful poem this afternoon! I love how you put in the elements of water, wind, and fire into this piece! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2013 at 11:45 PM Good to see another one from you, constance. I rarely use the list of poem-new. But it's kind of fun to skim down it when I have a little time.