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Temblor

Natural seismic Phenomenon, we know as Earthquakes energies http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-6.php

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/16/2010 9:14:00 AM

Indeed, but how devastated can their results be! Very well written Haiku, James! Looks like we are reading each other's poetry at the same time. How cool! Best wishes, Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2010 8:23:00 AM

Good one, James. DO you do many haiku? I rarely attempt one. I am just no good at it. But I am glad you liked my senryu. Luv ya, andrea

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/15/2010 2:11:00 AM

Nature is a law onto its self. Well put. ...Margaret

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/14/2010 9:05:00 PM

Great description with a bold title, nice work James...Raul

Date: 1/14/2010 6:00:00 PM

Fitting for the recent event in Haiti. What a tragedy. So many lives lost is such a short time. Lets pray the help that they are receiving truly makes a difference in that country. Keep on writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/14/2010 5:37:00 PM

After the smaller version we experienced in No Calif. last weekend...(although a 6.5...which did 3 million dollars damage to the coastal towns)..... Californians still feel BLESSED. Please, everyone, let us all send dollars to help the Haitians. Whatever one can spare...and of course our prayers.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/14/2010 5:11:00 PM

What a dreadful phenomenon too! I pray for all affected by this recent tragedy. Good job, James! Peace and love, Audrey

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/14/2010 3:42:00 PM

Great Haiku..Ive been in some real quakes..one time I was fishing when it hit..it was the strangest feeling..we werent quite sure what was going on. BG

James Peranteau

Date: 1/14/2010 3:16:00 PM

Perfect Haiku Mr. Fraser and timely for those who long for the explanation ! "Phenomenon" !

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2010 2:39:00 PM

Outstanding, timely haiku, James. Didn't think Haiti could be hit by an earthquake, but it just goes to show you how little we know about the underground earth activity. Guess we are all potential targets. Excellent work here! Much love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2010 2:18:00 PM

Devastation left in their aftermath if very strong. Neat short explanation. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and reading my poems of late and commenting. Sara