Temblor

Natural seismic Phenomenon, we know as Earthquakes energies http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-6.php
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Delacroix Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Indeed, but how devastated can their results be! Very well written Haiku, James! Looks like we are reading each other's poetry at the same time. How cool! Best wishes, Caroline.
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 8:23 AM
Good one, James. DO you do many haiku? I rarely attempt one. I am just no good at it. But I am glad you liked my senryu. Luv ya, andrea
Foster Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 2:11 AM
Nature is a law onto its self. Well put. ...Margaret
Moreno Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 9:05 PM
Great description with a bold title, nice work James...Raul
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January 14, 2010 at 6:00 PM
Fitting for the recent event in Haiti. What a tragedy. So many lives lost is such a short time. Lets pray the help that they are receiving truly makes a difference in that country. Keep on writing. Karen
Richards Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 5:37 PM
After the smaller version we experienced in No Calif. last weekend...(although a 6.5...which did 3 million dollars damage to the coastal towns)..... Californians still feel BLESSED. Please, everyone, let us all send dollars to help the Haitians. Whatever one can spare...and of course our prayers.
Haick Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 5:11 PM
What a dreadful phenomenon too! I pray for all affected by this recent tragedy. Good job, James! Peace and love, Audrey
Gorelick Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 3:42 PM
Great Haiku..Ive been in some real quakes..one time I was fishing when it hit..it was the strangest feeling..we werent quite sure what was going on. BG
Peranteau Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Perfect Haiku Mr. Fraser and timely for those who long for the explanation ! "Phenomenon" !
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January 14, 2010 at 2:39 PM
Outstanding, timely haiku, James. Didn't think Haiti could be hit by an earthquake, but it just goes to show you how little we know about the underground earth activity. Guess we are all potential targets. Excellent work here! Much love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 2:18 PM
Devastation left in their aftermath if very strong. Neat short explanation. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and reading my poems of late and commenting. Sara
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