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Killing occurs in front of kids on crowded streets When every conflict ends in senseless violence And fear takes stage as death becomes routine Looking for a meaning where one does not exist It spreads far and wide jolting every corner of life Inside churches, schools, and spaces in between Where unthinkable happens attacking humanity Probing each time why guns are sold like candy Hearing their cries, tears reign saddened eyes Those who didn't die asking why they survived As the nation drowns in grief one more time Immobilized, witnessing end of innocent lives Friends they saw that day left without goodbye Conversations interrupted filling in the blanks Words unsaid cower listening to heart demur Repulsed by ugliness, clinging to solemn faith Protests mount louder in the halls of Congress Students deploy eloquence to confront inaction Hearing again falsity nation has heard before Fear gets replaced by a resolve to find answers Millions have been counted as vocal protesters Speaking intelligently to challenge lawmakers Awakening goodness of freedom loving angels Looking for our voice, to hear how much we care Every movement relies on the goodwill of citizens Its success originates in a rational conversation Decipher again the words of second amendment Nothing there envisions a bullet ridden nation April 1, 2018 Social justice contest by John Hamilton Societal discontent by Brendan Simons

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Date: 11/17/2018 1:59:00 PM
Hi Vijay, a superb write on the subject. This poem touches the heart. This one had to be on a winners list Vijay. When does the violence stop? I don't know. Loved the content. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 4/18/2018 8:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win so compassionately written. Although I disagree with some of your examples, I hate that anyone witness or be a victim of violence of any kind.
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Date: 4/18/2018 4:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Vijay on your win with such a touching poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/18/2018 6:19:00 AM
Thank you Subimal.
Date: 4/17/2018 4:35:00 PM
Congrats on your very compassionate poem, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/18/2018 6:18:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 4/17/2018 3:20:00 PM
An interesting and thought provoking piece Vijay, thanks for entering and congrats on placing!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/18/2018 6:18:00 AM
Thank you John.
Date: 4/8/2018 8:51:00 AM
We are very lucky to be living in Australia Vijay, which has a No Guns Policy, we get by quite well without them. Your free verse is so well expressed, its sad times we are living in. Good luck in the contest, winning material I see here....Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/18/2018 6:18:00 AM
Thank you Maria.
Date: 4/3/2018 3:01:00 PM
dealing in guns seems to be the new politics today excellent pen striking its content vijay it strikes deeply at the human condition
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/18/2018 6:17:00 AM
Thank you liam.
Date: 4/3/2018 1:34:00 PM
Vijay, this sent shivers down my spine, the whole thing and I agree with your sentiments. I particularly enoyed this line : Hearing their cries, tears reign saddened eyes Those who didn't die asking why they survived Whole thing was amazing thanks for sharing it with us!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2018 1:44:00 PM
Many thanks Kyle..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 4/3/2018 2:21:00 AM
Excellent. Well expressed. Yes, no guns to youth. Beautifully written poetry. Thanks for sharing it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2018 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Ravi..appreciate your comments.
Date: 4/2/2018 4:09:00 PM
no to guns for the youth... a searing piece that wakes man's consciousness, vijay... huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2018 4:38:00 PM
Many thanks nette--appreciate your thoughts and kind words.
Date: 4/2/2018 3:02:00 PM
- If I had ten thumbs ... I would bet all on this amazing writing, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2018 4:37:00 PM
Appreciate your cheerful comments, as a;ways, Anne-Lise...many thanks.
Date: 4/2/2018 8:17:00 AM
Simply excellent, Vijay. You have perfectly expressed how so many of us feel, well done !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2018 12:27:00 PM
Thank you Mike..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 4/2/2018 8:09:00 AM
Eloquently written...with compassion and love...the solution probably has nothing to do with guns or mental illness, all a distraction...for the God of money and power...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2018 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Arturo..appreciate your thoughts and kind words.
Date: 4/2/2018 8:05:00 AM
There is very little social justice in this world my friend.. Greed and power rule... Not what the common man wants.. This is one of your best writes in my opinion...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2018 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Silent One..appreciate your support and comments.
Date: 4/2/2018 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations my friend, Vijay, for writing this human too human poem at the moment humanity is in peril! May people listen ! God is delighted to see your poem!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2018 12:24:00 PM
Always happy to read your cheerful comments..many thanks my friend.
Date: 4/1/2018 9:07:00 PM
excellent , Vijay ! luck in the contest! Happy Easter hugs eve!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2018 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Eve..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 4/1/2018 5:35:00 PM
I am totally with you on this one, Vijay. People are taking that ammendment far too literally!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2018 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..always appreciate your thoughts and comments.