Tell Them We Care

Killing occurs in front of kids on crowded streets
When every conflict ends in senseless violence
And fear takes stage as death becomes routine
Looking for a meaning where one does not exist

It spreads far and wide jolting every corner of life
Inside churches, schools, and spaces in between
Where unthinkable happens attacking humanity
Probing each time why guns are sold like candy

Hearing their cries, tears reign saddened eyes
Those who didn't die asking why they survived
As the nation drowns in grief one more time
Immobilized, witnessing end of innocent lives

Friends they saw that day left without goodbye
Conversations interrupted filling in the blanks
Words unsaid cower listening to heart demur
Repulsed by ugliness, clinging to solemn faith 

Protests mount louder in the halls of Congress
Students deploy eloquence to confront inaction
Hearing again falsity nation has heard before
Fear gets replaced by a resolve to find answers

Millions have been counted as vocal protesters
Speaking intelligently to challenge lawmakers
Awakening goodness of freedom loving angels
Looking for our voice, to hear how much we care

Every movement relies on the goodwill of citizens
Its success originates in a rational conversation
Decipher again the words of second amendment
Nothing there envisions a bullet ridden nation

April 1, 2018
Social justice contest by John Hamilton
Societal discontent by Brendan Simons
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 7:47 AM
'Friends they saw that day left without goodbye Conversations interrupted filling in the blanks'..... The cruelties on innocent children are so heartbreaking ! The schools when turn into places where death lurks is so miserable and terrifying. Very heart rending write, Vijay
Raven Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 1:59 PM
Hi Vijay, a superb write on the subject. This poem touches the heart. This one had to be on a winners list Vijay. When does the violence stop? I don't know. Loved the content. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Congratulations on your win so compassionately written. Although I disagree with some of your examples, I hate that anyone witness or be a victim of violence of any kind.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 4:06 AM
Congratulations, Vijay on your win with such a touching poem.
Pandit Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 6:19 AM
Thank you Subimal.
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 4:35 PM
Congrats on your very compassionate poem, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Thank you Line.
Hamilton Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 3:20 PM
An interesting and thought provoking piece Vijay, thanks for entering and congrats on placing!!
Pandit Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Thank you John.
Williams Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 8:51 AM
We are very lucky to be living in Australia Vijay, which has a No Guns Policy, we get by quite well without them. Your free verse is so well expressed, its sad times we are living in. Good luck in the contest, winning material I see here....Maria
Pandit Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Thank you Maria.
Mcdaid Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:01 PM
dealing in guns seems to be the new politics today excellent pen striking its content vijay it strikes deeply at the human condition
Pandit Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 6:17 AM
Thank you liam.
Kriticos Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 1:34 PM
Vijay, this sent shivers down my spine, the whole thing and I agree with your sentiments. I particularly enoyed this line : Hearing their cries, tears reign saddened eyes Those who didn't die asking why they survived Whole thing was amazing thanks for sharing it with us!
Pandit Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Many thanks Kyle..appreciate your kind words.
Sathasivam Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:21 AM
Excellent. Well expressed. Yes, no guns to youth. Beautifully written poetry. Thanks for sharing it.
Pandit Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 6:04 AM
Thank you Ravi..appreciate your comments.
Onclaud Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 4:09 PM
no to guns for the youth... a searing piece that wakes man's consciousness, vijay... huggs
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Many thanks nette--appreciate your thoughts and kind words.
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 3:02 PM
- If I had ten thumbs ... I would bet all on this amazing writing, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Appreciate your cheerful comments, as a;ways, Anne-Lise...many thanks.
Gentile Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Simply excellent, Vijay. You have perfectly expressed how so many of us feel, well done !!
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Thank you Mike..appreciate your kind feedback.
Michael Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:09 AM
Eloquently written...with compassion and love...the solution probably has nothing to do with guns or mental illness, all a distraction...for the God of money and power...All the best Vijay
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Thank you Arturo..appreciate your thoughts and kind words.
One Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:05 AM
There is very little social justice in this world my friend.. Greed and power rule... Not what the common man wants.. This is one of your best writes in my opinion...
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Silent One..appreciate your support and comments.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:07 AM
Congratulations my friend, Vijay, for writing this human too human poem at the moment humanity is in peril! May people listen ! God is delighted to see your poem!
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Always happy to read your cheerful comments..many thanks my friend.
Roper Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:07 PM
excellent , Vijay ! luck in the contest! Happy Easter hugs eve!
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Thank you Eve..appreciate your kind words.
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:35 PM
I am totally with you on this one, Vijay. People are taking that ammendment far too literally!
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Thank you Andrea..always appreciate your thoughts and comments.
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