Tell Me What You Really Think

You sat and looked at me as if,
I had lost my mind.
You told me I was crazy,
That I was unrefined.
The kind of life I offered
That you could not accept.
I think there’s just a few lines
That I may have overstepped.

You said I had a screw loose
That I was fruity as a bat.
You called me crazy as a loon 
 Delirious and erratic.
Deranged, demented, dingy daft.
Bonkers, crazed and cracked
Unbalanced, unglued, unhinged unzipped
Kooky, mad and whacked.

You said I was a lunatic
Psycho and berserk
Out of my freakin mind
A screwy, batty, jerk
You called me a screwball
A flaky no good fink
And I said babe tell me
What you really think.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Walker Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 1:18 PM
Hilarious......... wonderful !!
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April 22, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Thank you for your kind review. i'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
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March 19, 2017 at 1:03 PM
Brilliantly funny Ricky :) :)
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March 20, 2017 at 11:44 AM
Thank you so much for the kind words.
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March 18, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Ha, ha, very clever and witty Ricky! Enjoyed~Che :)
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March 19, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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