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Tell Me What You Really Think

You sat and looked at me as if, I had lost my mind. You told me I was crazy, That I was unrefined. The kind of life I offered That you could not accept. I think there’s just a few lines That I may have overstepped. You said I had a screw loose That I was fruity as a bat. You called me crazy as a loon Delirious and erratic. Deranged, demented, dingy daft. Bonkers, crazed and cracked Unbalanced, unglued, unhinged unzipped Kooky, mad and whacked. You said I was a lunatic Psycho and berserk Out of my freakin mind A screwy, batty, jerk You called me a screwball A flaky no good fink And I said babe tell me What you really think.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/22/2017 1:18:00 PM
Hilarious......... wonderful !!
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Ricky Sholar
Date: 4/22/2017 9:11:00 PM
Thank you for your kind review. i'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Date: 3/19/2017 1:03:00 PM
Brilliantly funny Ricky :) :)
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Ricky Sholar
Date: 3/20/2017 11:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for the kind words.
Date: 3/18/2017 8:49:00 PM
Ha, ha, very clever and witty Ricky! Enjoyed~Che :)
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Ricky Sholar
Date: 3/19/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thank you. Glad you liked it.

Book: Shattered Sighs