Tell Me Please

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How does one capture a female heart?
When all her male suitors
Are all over her like stink on an ape?

How do I profess such undying love?
That nothing would stop my romantic advances
Other than the gun she has aimed at my heart

From under her window sill
So I have stated, so I have sung
I would climb the highest mountains
I would cross the stormiest of seas
I would trek across the most arid of deserts
I would forage through the densest of rainforests

Sadly dear I can not come over tonight
As it’s raining out
But my heart still cries out for you, you see
Justin Beiber loves songs echo in my ears
As I long for you tonight

My phone rings and brings me back to reality
It’s your best friend Jenny calling me
I am so sorry
We have to break up
Jenny just kissed me over the phone
She’s awesome

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Poesy Relish

Date: 12/23/2015 11:44:00 AM

lol... loved this one Arthur... how young hearts change in the blink of an eye...

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/23/2015 7:33:00 PM

Yes, thank you so much!! Hugs!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/27/2015 10:36:00 AM

Smiling Arthur.....you described young love splendidly with a silly flair. Hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/3/2015 10:04:00 PM

Why thank you dear Cecilia!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2015 4:26:00 PM

Very creative, as usual....but Justin Beiber is not on my fav list!! Love your final stanza:) I understand that young love can be quite tricky! // paul

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/3/2015 11:46:00 PM

Nor mine, but as I was tossing around some laughter at young love figured might as well play it to the hilt!! Thanks Paul!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2015 1:06:00 PM

- Awesome sweet ..... :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/30/2015 7:48:00 PM

thank you Anne Lise, a silly one to make us smile

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2015 7:02:00 AM

You my friend are a creative genius - they should be queing at your door! This made me smile my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/30/2015 7:47:00 PM

Well I think i will have to agree with you on this one!!!! hugs

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/29/2015 9:28:00 PM

Thank you for this enjoyable read! So clever with a great sense of humor - love it! Only from the mind of Arthur! You just know how to do it! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/29/2015 9:31:00 PM

Thank you Pandita, this one had me laughing!