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Tell It To The Rain

Like the cloud, I am collecting the moisture in memory, Soaking up the solitude, I have been alone in misery. Feeling full on failure, droplet wall builds on my skin, Heavy with weight of the world, sadness is soaked in. Like the cloud, I feel the lightening pulsing inside, Anger and agony on a bolt of energy ride. Thunder is my roar, ominous warnings shy to the volcanic eruption that is my sky. Like the cloud, I hear the air slice apart in broken fear, And I collect all things wet and drip them in a tear. Upon the world I release all my anxiety and pain, Captured inside capsules, I tell it to the rain. Like the cloud, I pour my soul from the height of hurt, And you wear my teardrops there, saturated white t-shirt. Parachute promises falling, raindrops from the cloud. You hold no umbrella because crying is not allowed. December 22, 2015 From Contest: Rain Hosted by : Silent One Judged 12/23/15 second place

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Date: 12/14/2017 10:10:00 PM
I see why you won :) This is both stirring and invigorating. Excellent write!
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Date: 11/3/2017 3:43:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Casarah, Silent has excellent taste.
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Date: 9/28/2017 3:34:00 AM
A remarkable emotive piece with amazing creativity in expressing sorrow and despair through Rain. So many beautifully sad lines and the imagery through your drenched words are stunning and deeply felt. This is magnificent writing Cas:) a fave
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Date: 1/2/2016 9:28:00 PM
Awesome write Casarah ..7...
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Date: 12/26/2015 6:11:00 AM
Excellent.....simply Excellent.....WOW
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Date: 12/24/2015 9:53:00 PM
Amazing, emotive write with awesome flow and imagery! Captivating piece that deserves its high placement on the winners list! Congratulations on your top of the chart win, Casarah! Pandita
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:44:00 PM
I love the message, flow and heart in this sad piece. Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:11:00 AM
Casarah, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smile & Joy **SKAT**
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Date: 12/24/2015 1:44:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this lovely write Casarah!
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Date: 12/24/2015 12:26:00 AM
Congratulations on winning with this awesome poem. It was very well organized and touched my heart. A favorite for me and a 7.
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Date: 12/23/2015 10:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win Cas, very well deserved, this was such a well constructed and emotional poem. The sentiments jumped out of the pages into the readers lap here! You are one brilliant poet!
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Date: 12/23/2015 10:44:00 PM
an amazing write, congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/23/2015 7:17:00 PM
Cas Many congrats I think you nailed this with the wonderful use of metaphores ... I have to disagree with Ian's comments:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/23/2015 4:15:00 PM
So moving, Casarah. Congratulations on your wonderful placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/23/2015 2:54:00 PM
Such a powerful write, one can feel the emotions splashing from the page, I am sorry to say I have to completely disagree with Ian`s comments.
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Date: 12/23/2015 2:13:00 PM
I found your poem through baffin chat! Such a nice poem, I really enjoyed reading this! Best wishes, Casarah x
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Date: 12/23/2015 1:58:00 PM
This poem rocks sis, I so get this one, peace and love xoxo
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Date: 12/23/2015 7:47:00 AM
If there was a poem and photo that belong together, well this is it. You are a master at this type of poetry, and this is an A7 for sure.
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Date: 12/23/2015 1:55:00 AM
Deeply moving, beautifully written. Merry Christmas, Casarah, to you and yours. Viv x
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