Tell It To the Rain

Like the cloud, I am collecting the moisture in memory,
Soaking up the solitude, I have been alone in misery.
Feeling full on failure, droplet wall builds on my skin,
Heavy with weight of the world, sadness is soaked in.

Like the cloud, I feel the lightening pulsing inside,
Anger and agony on a bolt of energy ride.
Thunder is my roar, ominous warnings shy
to the volcanic eruption that is my sky.

Like the cloud, I hear the air slice apart in broken fear,
And I collect all things wet and drip them in a tear.
Upon the world I release all my anxiety and pain,
Captured inside capsules, I tell it to the rain.

Like the cloud, I pour my soul from the height of hurt,
And you wear my teardrops there, saturated white t-shirt.
Parachute promises falling, raindrops from the cloud.
You hold no umbrella because crying is not allowed.


December 22, 2015
From Contest: Rain 
Hosted by : Silent One Judged 12/23/15
second place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Thomas Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 10:10 PM
I see why you won :) This is both stirring and invigorating. Excellent write!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 3:43 PM
Congrats on a fine win Casarah, Silent has excellent taste.
Marie Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 3:34 AM
A remarkable emotive piece with amazing creativity in expressing sorrow and despair through Rain. So many beautifully sad lines and the imagery through your drenched words are stunning and deeply felt. This is magnificent writing Cas:) a fave
May Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Awesome write Casarah ..7...
Konos Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 6:11 AM
Excellent.....simply Excellent.....WOW
Sietesantos Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 9:53 PM
Amazing, emotive write with awesome flow and imagery! Captivating piece that deserves its high placement on the winners list! Congratulations on your top of the chart win, Casarah! Pandita
Lindley Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 3:44 PM
I love the message, flow and heart in this sad piece. Congrats on your win!!
A  Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 2:11 AM
Casarah, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smile & Joy **SKAT**
A. Sharma Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 1:44 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this lovely write Casarah!
Gentry Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 12:26 AM
Congratulations on winning with this awesome poem. It was very well organized and touched my heart. A favorite for me and a 7.
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 10:47 PM
Congrats on your win Cas, very well deserved, this was such a well constructed and emotional poem. The sentiments jumped out of the pages into the readers lap here! You are one brilliant poet!
Hamilton Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 10:44 PM
an amazing write, congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 7:17 PM
Cas Many congrats I think you nailed this with the wonderful use of metaphores ... I have to disagree with Ian's comments:-( hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 4:15 PM
So moving, Casarah. Congratulations on your wonderful placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Lariviere Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 2:54 PM
Such a powerful write, one can feel the emotions splashing from the page, I am sorry to say I have to completely disagree with Ian`s comments.
Rogers Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 2:13 PM
I found your poem through baffin chat! Such a nice poem, I really enjoyed reading this! Best wishes, Casarah x
Severo Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 1:58 PM
This poem rocks sis, I so get this one, peace and love xoxo
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 7:47 AM
If there was a poem and photo that belong together, well this is it. You are a master at this type of poetry, and this is an A7 for sure.
Wigley Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 1:55 AM
Deeply moving, beautifully written. Merry Christmas, Casarah, to you and yours. Viv x
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