Tell It Like It Is

Once referred to as meaningless blather Much of communication these days falters In fact, putting the truth in a precarious bind, We obfuscate, equivocate; often, lying at altars. Much of communication these days falters Why can’t we all simply say what we mean We obfuscate, equivocate; often, lying at altars Why not tell it like it is without shine or sheen? Why can’t we all simply say what we mean And mean what we say, so there’s no doubt Why not tell it like it is without shine or sheen? There’s no reason to get angry and shout! And mean what we say, so there’s no doubt About the points we’re trying to get across There’s no reason to get angry and shout! Half-truths and cockeyed theories are a loss. About the points we’re trying to get across Let’s be careful when expressing pieces of our mind Half-truths and cockeyed theories are a loss In fact, putting the truth in a precarious bind. Let’s be careful when expressing pieces of our mind, Few folks say what they mean, they’d rather, In fact, putting the truth in a precarious bind, Once referred to as meaningless blather.
Written October 28, 2022 Submitted to “Tell It Like It Is” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose
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Baker Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:37 AM
Great entry for the contest, Milt. Shouldn't need luck! Well written in Pantoum form, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessing Bill
Parker Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 7:10 PM
Say what you think...voice drop. Most of the time nobody cares or even hears. Offense at what people think...mic drop. Intriguing form, well done. ~;o/
Hankins Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 9:11 PM
Thanks so much for your thoughts and your comment, Arlo.
Buehler Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 9:50 PM
Your skillfully composed pantoum is a wonderful contest contender, Milton. It conveys such wisdom and truth. :)
Hankins Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 9:05 AM
Thanks so much, Evelyn. I hope it does well.
Anaya Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 5:16 PM
You've read it all, Milt I trust you over and over again. Great advice as usual!
Hankins Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 9:06 AM
Thank you, Anaya. Have a good weekend.
Gorelick Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Mark Twain: 21 A lie can travel halfway around the world while the truth is putting on its shoes. Lies travel around the world before the truth has the chance to get its shoes on--Church Hill. Various versions!
Hankins Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 2:59 PM
So true, Robert. Thanks so much for reminding me of this Twainism which I had forgotten.
Logan Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 12:56 PM
This is great advice to those who are willing to work things out, Milt. Communication is key, but it must willingly take place by all who are involved.
Hankins Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 3:00 PM
So true Jenna. I hope this Pantoum will work well in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 12:31 PM
- So true and lovely written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Hankins Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 3:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine.
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