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Tell It Like It Is

Once referred to as meaningless blather Much of communication these days falters In fact, putting the truth in a precarious bind, We obfuscate, equivocate; often, lying at altars. Much of communication these days falters Why can’t we all simply say what we mean We obfuscate, equivocate; often, lying at altars Why not tell it like it is without shine or sheen? Why can’t we all simply say what we mean And mean what we say, so there’s no doubt Why not tell it like it is without shine or sheen? There’s no reason to get angry and shout! And mean what we say, so there’s no doubt About the points we’re trying to get across There’s no reason to get angry and shout! Half-truths and cockeyed theories are a loss. About the points we’re trying to get across Let’s be careful when expressing pieces of our mind Half-truths and cockeyed theories are a loss In fact, putting the truth in a precarious bind. Let’s be careful when expressing pieces of our mind, Few folks say what they mean, they’d rather, In fact, putting the truth in a precarious bind, Once referred to as meaningless blather.
Written October 28, 2022 Submitted to “Tell It Like It Is” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 10/30/2022 9:37:00 AM
Great entry for the contest, Milt. Shouldn't need luck! Well written in Pantoum form, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessing Bill
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Date: 10/29/2022 7:10:00 PM
Say what you think...voice drop. Most of the time nobody cares or even hears. Offense at what people think...mic drop. Intriguing form, well done. ~;o/
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/29/2022 9:11:00 PM
Thanks so much for your thoughts and your comment, Arlo.
Date: 10/28/2022 9:50:00 PM
Your skillfully composed pantoum is a wonderful contest contender, Milton. It conveys such wisdom and truth. :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/29/2022 9:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Evelyn. I hope it does well.
Date: 10/28/2022 5:16:00 PM
You've read it all, Milt I trust you over and over again. Great advice as usual!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/29/2022 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Anaya. Have a good weekend.
Date: 10/28/2022 2:12:00 PM
Mark Twain: 21 A lie can travel halfway around the world while the truth is putting on its shoes. Lies travel around the world before the truth has the chance to get its shoes on--Church Hill. Various versions!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/28/2022 2:59:00 PM
So true, Robert. Thanks so much for reminding me of this Twainism which I had forgotten.
Date: 10/28/2022 12:56:00 PM
This is great advice to those who are willing to work things out, Milt. Communication is key, but it must willingly take place by all who are involved.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/28/2022 3:00:00 PM
So true Jenna. I hope this Pantoum will work well in the contest.
Date: 10/28/2022 12:31:00 PM
- So true and lovely written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/28/2022 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine.

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