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The quick sands of fate cave in The sucking darkness captures The weed of agony marsh slithers Entangled hope of escape smothered Hazard paves the pathway of life For the destiny to wander unseen. Uncalculated footsteps waver The poise vacillates uncontrolled The trap of time in the mire waits For the weary traveller to arrive Walking in the shadow of destiny On the unknown pathway of life. The survival contest then begins In the arena of the trying times Struggling hard to reach salvation Tread on the pathway of life Until the call comes to join The ordained farewell party. Destiny is not an excuse The walk is one’s own walk The pathway lighted or dark The lamp maker within decides Amble on garden path or marshy trail The inner voice dictates. The light of consciousness guides the being In the journey of realization To the blissful destination of divine sanctity At the end of the pathway of life. _____________ October 28, 2022

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Date: 11/2/2022 2:44:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this reality... poetically exposed and expressed. God bless you.
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Date: 11/1/2022 3:16:00 AM
"Destiny is not an excuse The walk is one’s own walk The pathway lighted or dark The lamp maker within decides" Agree with you cent percent. We are the makers of our own destiny and it is the lamp holder who sees that the path is lighted or left darkened . Congratulations dear friend on your win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/1/2022 3:38:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa for your kind visit and for your illuminting comments.
Date: 10/28/2022 12:14:00 PM
Hello Subimal Sinha-Roy, I read this twice. It will be my fav. Blessing my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/1/2022 11:53:00 AM
Hello Subimal Sin-ha-Roy, You are welcome. enjoy your day my friend. Blessings.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/31/2022 10:37:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene for your kind visit and for liking the poem.

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