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Tell - You Need To Be Heard

How could he honestly tell anyone
Who would actually believe him
A strong confident young man
Smiling on the outside ….petrified within

Excuses made for the obvious ones
With casual jest and smiles
Yet , it was so far from the truth 
By a million miles

He absolutely adored her
In the beginning…it was so good
There had been a few incidents
She apologised….of course he understood

It drastically changed when they moved in together
She started to take control
Alienated now from family and friends
She became the destroyer of his soul

He was no longer good enough
She screamed, punched, spat and kicked
Emasculated and humiliated him
He never retaliated during conflict

She abused and battered his body and spirit
Afterwards claiming she would change 
Embarrassed, isolated and depleted
He just stayed time and again

Neighbours called the police
A loud domestic was in progress
Police arrived to an alarming scene
One of agonising screams and extreme distress

She had poured boiling water
Over his legs while he slept
Just because he wouldn’t get up
Her idea of disrespect

She was jailed for many years
He finally felt free
His scars a visual reminder
To remain, strong, whole and in himself ‘believe’

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/23/2025 10:10:00 AM
Very well written to deliver the intended impact, not only the suffering of one and mental wiring of the other, but the fact that men are also abused. Some find it difficult to wrap their minds around, but it's true as illustrated in these clear convincing, rhyming lines. CayCay
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Date: 5/26/2025 4:26:00 PM
Thankyou CayCay....Debx
Date: 5/23/2025 12:02:00 AM
This is horrifying, it is a powerful poem of yes, abuse happens to men too. I hope this was not a true story, but I'm guessing it is.
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Date: 5/24/2025 10:43:00 AM
No BJ it's a fiction write my friend! Abuse towards men is out there and it needs to be recognised.....Thankyou my friend...Debx
Date: 5/20/2025 4:16:00 PM
Holt Sh*t, Deb. That’s powerful! In a world of ‘he beats she’ you highlight, brilliantly, the rarely observed fact that, sometimes, ‘she beats he’. I’ve observed that up close, though not to such extremes. Excellent. Terry
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Date: 5/26/2025 4:26:00 PM
Thanks Terry...Debx
Date: 5/19/2025 9:27:00 AM
Dear Deb, Powerful! Necessary and brave, compassionate voice for those whose pain too often goes unheard. O' the silent suffering, the shame, and the long road to freedom with such honesty and empathy in your words. Sometimnes it takes a lot of strength to survive and believe in oneself again. Your words are both a comfort and a call for understanding. Spring Blessings, My Dear Deb, Daniel
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Date: 5/26/2025 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Daniel....Debx
Date: 5/18/2025 2:48:00 PM
Well said Deb, it happens and the abused won’t tell, afraid of their lives becoming a living hell… Beryl
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Date: 5/26/2025 4:24:00 PM
Thanks Beryl....Debx
Date: 5/18/2025 2:41:00 PM
That's a role reversal scenario Deb. Abuse is not gender restrictive. Your point is well made.
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Date: 5/26/2025 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Lin...Debx
Date: 5/18/2025 2:28:00 PM
male or female....shit really does happen ......len
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Date: 5/21/2025 7:58:00 AM
Yes it does Len….Debx

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