Teeth Falls In Snow

"Teeth fell in snow" said Joe an old fellow
"Will find it" said wife her tone was mellow
"But how will you find it in snow?"
 Back fast her joy did overflow
 Said "It was easy your teeth are yellow!"

Date: 12/31/2020
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 4:14 AM
Good one. The teeth were a great contrast. Congrats on this winner. Sara
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 4:21 AM
Thanks Sara. Congratulations to you too. Have a wonderful day ahead friend. Take care Rama
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 12:08 PM
hahaha. That was GOOD one. Congrats.
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 4:00 AM
Thanks Andrea and same to you too. Have a blessed day ahead friend. Take care, Rama
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 3:48 PM
really enjoyed this fun one rama, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 10:32 PM
Your comments made me happy. Wanted to write something which not about falling in snow. Thanks for congratulations and same to you too. Take care,Rama
Chamberlain Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 11:43 AM
Brilliant very original. Haha congratulations on your winning placement.
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 10:31 PM
Your comments made me happy. Wanted to write something which not about falling in snow. Thanks for congratulations and same to you too. Take care,Rama
Koplin Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on your win, Rama!
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 10:29 PM
Thanks and same to you too. Happy New year. Take care,Rama
Fowler Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 5:59 AM
Funny Rama. :)) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Thanks and same to you too. Happy New year. Take care,Rama
Kitchin Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 4:13 AM
Rama, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick!
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 6:49 AM
Thanks Tanya. Fun contest. You take time out to place all and congratulate all winners. I appreciate that. It is fun to read all entries. Happy New year. Take care Rama
Wolf Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 4:10 PM
Ha, ha! Very good, Rama! Enjoyed. ~ Gershon
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Thanks
Rose  Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 5:29 AM
Ah, that is a really good, Rama, no I am not Indian, but I do appreciate all faiths and spiritual writings, I am ecumenical by nature, sending light and hope your way, dear poet.
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Thanks
Bordner Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 12:55 AM
Creative way to find advantage in the circumstance...cool positivity Poet. It's a good thing he didn't drop his resume in the snow, it's so blank you wouldn't be able to find it...lol...J.A.B.
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 2:41 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting. Wishing you and your family a very happy new year. Take care Rama
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