Teeth

TEETH

Taking a dry lick
Over the smoke stain, guck,
Mouth forced wide as parched lips permit,
I marvel at my luck

For God’s sake, I still taste!
Even with barren limbs in stark tragedy
I’ve no toothache, bite only a bit numb,
Why this infernal haste?

Over the pain I’d mumbled a prayer 
To the reaper, 
To Miss E.R. Nightingale,
“Take me!  Not a moment spare!”

“Show in the cooing cloth
I’ve a message to whisper
Though I stumbled my way through life,
So did we, my wife, both.”

Die? Now I’m not too certain
The taste buds have returned
So, in this clammy atmosphere, antiseptic smell,
      I yell,
“Bring on the soup! Open the curtain!”

Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/24/2014 11:55:00 AM
oh my, I looked down to see that I had not once commented on this. HOw strange I let a poem of yours get past me. this one was dark but humorous in the end, like many of yours are lately. Loved that ending. as long as there is soup we can taste, keep those curtains open!!!
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Date: 12/24/2014 11:54:00 AM
nope, daver, that is a longing of mine you read that I highly doubt will ever be realized!
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Date: 9/23/2014 11:37:00 PM
I'm not too sure of that taste...but it's certainly something I can smell...that antiseptic.
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