Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

Ted My Hospital Visitor

Lying in hospital was visiting time
My cousin walked in with a box so fine
Handed it over said it was for me
To open it when I needed company

The box said Teddy Bears Factory
Inside was Ted’s whole story
His birth certificate is complete
Many things including birth date

Was dressed with hat and scarf
Looked so funny, made me laugh
Specs sat on end of his nose
Looking ready to compose

But he was so good to cwtch *
Instantly loved him so much
Such thoughtfulness I wont forget
My Ted is my best mate

Helped me to recover quickly
My magic pill when I’m sickly
Took 29 years for a Ted so special
Came with love of highest level

*Cwtch  is welsh for cuddle

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Robin Davis April 27, 2014 at 12:13 PM Seren Such a cute and charming write about your childhood friend and companion. So sweet and adorable. Thank you for the great comment on my Colors poem Seren Roberts April 28, 2014 at 7:50 PM Hi and thank you, wonders why u chose this poem to read...Seren

Debra Squyres January 30, 2013 at 12:28 PM heartfelt !! Congrats on your win and so sorry for your losses in reality. Blessings !!

Joyce Johnson January 29, 2013 at 9:45 AM A lovely poem and win. A special Teddy indeed. Congratulaitons. Love, Joyce Seren Roberts January 29, 2013 at 9:57 AM Thank you Joyce .....Seren

Bukang Liwayway January 29, 2013 at 8:38 AM Congratulations on your win friend Seren..what a nice visitor your precious Ted..Cheers! Hugs, Maria Seren Roberts January 29, 2013 at 9:58 AM Yes Maria he was and still is.....Seren

Richard Lamoureux January 29, 2013 at 7:09 AM What a thoughtful gift you received. Congrats on win. Seren Roberts January 29, 2013 at 9:58 AM Yes Richard was great will take him bak with me when i go into hosp again an about 3 weeks... Seren

Joseph May January 29, 2013 at 5:47 AM congrats on your win Seren Seren Roberts January 29, 2013 at 9:59 AM Thank you so much Joseph.....Seren

Francine Roberts January 28, 2013 at 11:13 PM awesome piece Seren, congrats on your win in the contest....p.s. my Grandfather was born in Wales, every time you give us a new Welsh word I write it down, I would love to learn the language Seren Roberts January 29, 2013 at 12:29 AM Thank you Francine....Seren ...soup

Mehnaz Veetil January 28, 2013 at 10:18 PM Congratulations on your HM , Seren Seren Roberts January 28, 2013 at 11:49 PM Thank you Mehnaz ...Seren

Poet Destroyer A January 28, 2013 at 9:42 PM Seren, Congratulations :-) on a cuddly interesting childhood thought and poem. Enjoyed your "Teddy Bear Picnic" winning poem in SandI's contest, ~Always* PD Seren Roberts January 28, 2013 at 11:49 PM Thank you P.D. ...Seren

Sandy Ivy D January 28, 2013 at 9:23 PM thank you' SandyIvy Seren Roberts January 28, 2013 at 11:33 PM Thank You....Seren

David Williams December 31, 2012 at 6:22 AM Seren hope you still have him, have a happy and peaceful New Year...David Seren Roberts December 31, 2012 at 5:07 PM yes I have him I only had him in June when I had openheart surgery.....will always have him

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 31, 2012 at 5:06 AM Give him a cwtch from me (and how the heck do you pronounce that) soup love xx Seren Roberts December 31, 2012 at 5:08 PM like hooch but with a c lol xxx Happy New Year

Harry Horsman December 31, 2012 at 4:09 AM Wow Seren, this is lovely, also says alot about you, as a human being, Ted sound a little like Rupert the bear, one i grew up with... good one really like. this poem..pob lwc Seren Roberts December 31, 2012 at 11:53 PM diolch i chi fy ffrind. gwneud yn dda to pob lwc Am saying thank you my friend well done to pob lwc. Seren

Andrea Dietrich December 30, 2012 at 8:31 PM a very cute celebration of your Teddy bear!! Mine was called Pinky winky! Seren Roberts December 31, 2012 at 12:20 AM Was it a pinky one? Mine is good old brownish colour. ....Seren

Tim Ryerson December 30, 2012 at 7:25 PM We could all use that kind of therapy!...as they say, 'laughter is the best medicine'...beatifully done, Seren Seren Roberts December 31, 2012 at 12:16 AM Yes Tim your right, thats a good adage. Happy New Year.....Seren

Carol Eastman December 30, 2012 at 6:23 PM You're lucky to have Ted.. My Hubby is there for me whenever I'm in the hospital, Too... Some times they can be so darn sweet! Seren Roberts December 30, 2012 at 6:39 PM no hubby to cwtch, so a Teddy bear is great. Lol He doesnt nag either ........Seren