Teats of Love

From a distant village, where forest lining the edges, where nature dancing with wild rhythms, where human existence have usual conflicts with minacious wild life, I bought an unparagoned cow. 

superbious gait
she glimmered in bright spotlight -
wild domestic breed

In that romantic night, where moon shy to pop out from behind the murky clouds, the queen in the cowshed spend her first night with the howling songs of dogs.

croaking frogs' sonnets
blended with loud fearful barks -
greeted the new guest

As the symphony of greetings continued the night and the night after, I was puzzled and forced to look around to meet a vacant sky and under it the haunting darkness.

predawn darkness stood
a veil to my eyes hiding 
mysteries of night

Unable to squirrel the burden of anxieties of my quizzical mind, I decided to stay awake to watch the cowshed and my cow under a splendid moonlit night.

mask of truth divulge
laurels stirred in fiery force -
a fine leopard leaped

My abstentious legs dragged back the fleeing heart, and I was rooted trembling as a pole left alone in a cyclone eye.

watchful twinkling eyes
stem the course to silent cow -
fearless mother licked

Astonished to saw the nonchalant cow, licking the beast same her calf, I decided to rend the skies for the jewels of truth behind this precious spectacle of love.

beast lost his wildness
under legs of licking cow -
Leopard lied there low

I took an assiduous journey back to her previous owner with the imagery of a leopard cherished by their benign cow, where I was welcomed by the most baffling story of motherhood.

the truth rushed at last
shivered reminiscence –
fed curious mind

Once a female Leopard lost her way to the erf of human dominance and suffered a pitiful end in their retiform, but before she touched the sacred stream of serenity, a baby was born to the hands of her pursuer. 

crying cub was fetched
from dying womb to the barn -
cow turned loving mam

Until the baby Leopard transformed to riotous youth, the halcyon mother cow fed him directly from her teats of love and then one day he was transferred to a faraway forest as an avowal of the law of land.

objections obliged
mother and her son parted -
but distance was dim

Hither to, on every darkest hours of silent nights, the different son visited her foster mother to share his adventures in the distant wild and to cherish the beauty of motherly love and it continues even the mother was transported to another house as the uncouth son followed her to her new abode.

trembled with pleasure
flower of truth opened soft -
fine fragrance of love



Won POTW (3rd week of August 2020)

First Place in STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (19) any theme any form Poetry Contest sponsored by Brain Strand

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Date: 9/17/2020 1:32:00 PM
BRILLANT HAIBUN, dear Jenish. Truly a masterpiece. ~ Elaine
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Date: 9/19/2020 10:16:00 PM
Thank you Elaine for your delightful words.. Have a great day..
Date: 8/29/2020 6:03:00 AM
This is so beautiful! Congratulations on Poem of the Week! I was riveted from the first stanza, and it never let me go. Captivating!
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Date: 9/7/2020 10:03:00 PM
Thank you Caren for your kind support..
Date: 8/26/2020 2:20:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w., Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2020 10:03:00 PM
Thank you Anne..
Date: 8/25/2020 3:13:00 PM
This beautifully written tale of love truly captures the heart, Jenish. Congratulations on Poem of the Week. :)
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Date: 9/7/2020 10:02:00 PM
Thank you for your kind support Evelyn..
Date: 8/21/2020 4:40:00 AM
Back with congrats on poem of the week, Jenish.
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Date: 9/7/2020 10:01:00 PM
Thank you Vijay... Your immense support is always appreciated..
Date: 8/20/2020 3:24:00 AM
A bouquet pf poetry, poetic gold mine... congrat salute alkas
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Date: 8/20/2020 4:27:00 AM
Thank you Alkas for your kind support..
Date: 8/20/2020 1:01:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for this amazing narrative in your awesome poetic presentation. I'm imagining a wonderful speech choir rendition for it. Likewise, thanks for this excellent example for the contest. God bless you.
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Date: 8/20/2020 4:26:00 AM
Thank you Beata for your delightful comment and support.. God bless you..
Date: 8/19/2020 2:18:00 AM
Nature in it's nurturing form....such an amazing read....Congrats on an amazing write.
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Date: 8/19/2020 2:32:00 AM
Thank you Carol for the delightful comment.. Have a great day..
Date: 8/17/2020 1:46:00 PM
Jenish, Congratulations on your POTW with your amazing haibun series and compelling narrative. Best wishes ~ John
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Date: 8/17/2020 9:32:00 PM
Thank you John.. Appreciate to know that you are back with congrats on my POTW.. Have a great day..
Date: 8/17/2020 11:57:00 AM
This is such a miraculous tale of love and selfless nurturing instinct of animals that we often overlook. You narrate it in an engrossing manner Jenish. Congratulations on your win and POTW. This one deserves all the accolades. A fave for me :) Blessings and love :)
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Date: 8/17/2020 9:31:00 PM
Thank you Aditi.. A fave from a fantastic poet is more than a wonderful award.. Have a great day..
Date: 8/16/2020 7:29:00 PM
An amazing story told in a totally creative way, Jenish! Congratulations on your POTW! All the best.
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Date: 8/16/2020 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Sam for your kind support..Have a great day..
Date: 8/16/2020 5:12:00 PM
Amazing story. These words wrap softly around me and my heart. "cherish the beauty of motherly love" In many ways. Yes, I agree. Congratulations Jenish, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy
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Date: 8/16/2020 8:21:00 PM
Thank you Brandy for your delightful comment and support..
Date: 8/16/2020 3:48:00 PM
Jenish, congratulations on your Poem Of The Week with your wonderful Haibun _Constance
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Date: 8/16/2020 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Constance for the support..
Date: 8/16/2020 4:15:00 AM
Your Haibun is totally awesome, Jenish. Congratulations on it being chosen as POTW.
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Date: 8/16/2020 4:27:00 AM
Thank you Jenna for your kind support.. Have a great day..
Date: 8/16/2020 1:37:00 AM
Back with many congrats Jenish on the honour of POTW. Tom
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Date: 8/16/2020 1:47:00 AM
Thank you Tom.. First time in POTW.. I'm delighted..
Date: 8/16/2020 1:27:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats on a very well deserved POTW jenish:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/16/2020 1:34:00 AM
Thank you Jan.. You are the messenger of the good news.. Have a great day..
Date: 8/14/2020 4:51:00 AM
Nice narration Jenish. I admire. I heard similar story about a foster tigress to feed a human baby. It's very unnatural, as they are in relation of prey and predator. Truly motherly feeling is non-parallel
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Date: 8/15/2020 9:46:00 PM
Thank you Anisha.. True..Motherly feeling is non-parallel.. So fatherly feelings.. lol...
Date: 8/11/2020 1:49:00 PM
I always find these kinds of stories so very interesting. And what they say to us about the creatures that we deem so "wild" and unthinking. Great way to show us the other side of the coin on that way of thinking!
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Date: 8/11/2020 10:13:00 PM
True Andrea.. Wild is not wild at least for those who cares to love.. Thank you for your fine review..
Date: 8/10/2020 10:32:00 PM
A simply astounding story in such an accomplished haibun, Jenish:) thank you for my placement in your alliteration contest:)
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Date: 8/11/2020 4:45:00 AM
Thank you Jo for your support.. And a big thanks for your wonderful alliteration in my contest.. I'm honoured...
Date: 8/10/2020 7:04:00 PM
WoW!!!!!! Amazing write, Jenish, I am tickled you led me to this beauty. Fantastic example. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:38:00 PM
Thank you for the delightful comment Eve.. Have a great day..
Date: 8/10/2020 12:38:00 PM
an epic haibun, i have never attempted one of this magnitude:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:37:00 PM
Thank you Jan.. Have a great day..
Date: 8/10/2020 9:15:00 AM
Amazing poetry, Jenish. Well done haibun, I congratulate you for your win ~ John
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:36:00 PM
Thank you John for your kind support.. Have a great day..
Date: 8/10/2020 6:33:00 AM
Hello Jenish sir, I was wondering what would you come up with ,after "blossoming love".Now I found this splendid work with amazing animal's tale & imageries.:-) "Crying cub was fetched from dying womb to the barn" - your lines are remarkable.:-) I am gonna FAVE this masterpiece of yours:-) Keep inspiring us.Take care.Warmest regards:-)
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:35:00 PM
Thank you Deepa for the FAVE and a delightful review.. You made my day bright..
Date: 8/10/2020 3:24:00 AM
This is simply amazing... the story, words, writing, poetry. It is truly an astonishing piece. I enjoyed and am faving it. God bless you
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Date: 8/10/2020 5:18:00 AM
I'm happy to know you liked it.. And a big thank you for faving it.. You made my day..
Date: 8/9/2020 9:52:00 PM
Entertainingly precious, Jenish, the layout and the length of this truly brings it to a greater level, Aloha! William
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Date: 8/10/2020 5:17:00 AM
Thank you William for your supportive review.. Have a great day..
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