Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts Poet Rhyme

Tease My Mind

tease my mind.
Here I stand gazing at you.
Your eyes twinkle from your tears
and lips that shine like the morning dew.
Your soft voice is music to my ears.

I love the firm taut feel  of your body  
while we stand in  a warm  embrace
You're such an intriguing mystery
one that seems to transcend this place.

You take my hand  and lead the way
Into a secret garden outside your place
Where the soft music begins to play
You gently begin to caress  my  face

Leaning  down close to my  ear.
I feel your  breath on my cheek
While you  slowly whisper
of all  the pleasures you seek

As we lay on the mossy ground
our bodies  are perfectly intertwined.
slowly your hand wanders around
me,while sensations  tease my mind.

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Josefina Costales July 29, 2015 at 2:25 AM I like how all the rhyming verses do not appear forced, flow smooth while getting warmer to the teasing the mind image. Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts July 29, 2015 at 7:25 PM THANKS so much for your kind comment. I'm glad you like it I've been writing for contests. and this is one that had to be sensual or romantic without being to far into erotic nature.

Aurore Severo July 28, 2015 at 11:31 AM very romantic, I like! Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts July 29, 2015 at 7:26 PM Thnaks for taking a moment to read this and leaving me your thoughts

Paul Callus July 28, 2015 at 10:58 AM Your words easily manage to tease our imagination, Bonnie! A lovely and pleasant offering! ~ All the best. // paul Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts July 28, 2015 at 11:18 AM Thanks. I've been trying to expand my topcis and styles. I'm part of another poetry group that has some really interesting contest prompts. So I've been writing things like this one . In hopes of bringing my fantasies and sensual side to life again. I appreciate the read and comments.