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Tears Waiting



Waiting, as pure and clear as drops from the high mountain peaks
Trembling now on your lashes as we wait for your heart to break
Tears to soften the pain, and cleanse the troubled soul of the lonely


Barbara Gorelick
For HG's contest.."Personify a Tear"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/26/2011 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Barbara. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, CarolCongratulations on your win in the contest . I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara
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Date: 4/22/2011 2:21:00 PM
Sometimes one just HAS to cry, very clear here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:52:00 AM
Great to see you near the top of the winner's list, Barbara. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:49:00 AM
BG, I loved it the first time ;) congratulations on your win ;)
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Date: 4/22/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win Barbara.Beautiful poem.
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Date: 4/22/2011 7:26:00 AM
This soft poem, filled with the heart of a tear. Lovely writing Barbara! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/22/2011 6:13:00 AM
Tears in wait-how quaint! The second line is well-versed and full of powerful personification! It's no wonder you scored such HM! Have a Belled Easter, Barbara! Gwendolen
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:41:00 AM
Many congratulations and a very happy Easter to you : )
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Barbara
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:16:00 AM
Congrats BG on your wonderful winning poem in HG's contest on tears.. perfect piece ..enjoy your top spot win with luv.. and a very blessed and Happy Easter celebration ..
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:33:00 PM
This is awesome in its simplicity, Barbara. A very well deserved win. congratulations.
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:50:00 PM
Beautiful BG. Many congrats, Have a blessed Easter.
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:23:00 PM
Very lovely Barbara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:13:00 PM
Dear Barbara, Thank-YOU for Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations On YOUR 3rd Place Win LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...Harry
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Date: 4/5/2011 12:30:00 PM
BG, quite a profound entry you have here.. Wishing you all the best for the contest ;)
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Date: 4/3/2011 4:37:00 PM
Though provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 4/3/2011 1:40:00 PM
Tears DO soften the pain and cleanse our souls, dear LNC. I guess that's why some people say they "need a good cry." Quite a profound entry for HG's contest. Wishing you success, dear! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/31/2011 6:55:00 PM
Very touching, Barbara. Best wishes in the contest. Lainie
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Date: 3/31/2011 4:15:00 AM
Lovely entry to the contest, Barbara
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Date: 3/30/2011 10:59:00 PM
wonderful sijo Barbara, best of luck in the contest
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