Home » Poems » Barbara Gorelick » Tears Waiting

Tears Waiting

Waiting, as pure and clear as drops from the high mountain peaks Trembling now on your lashes as we wait for your heart to break Tears to soften the pain, and cleanse the troubled soul of the lonely Barbara Gorelick For HG's contest.."Personify a Tear"

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/26/2011 4:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Barbara. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, CarolCongratulations on your win in the contest . I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/22/2011 4:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/22/2011 2:21:00 PM

Sometimes one just HAS to cry, very clear here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2011 11:52:00 AM

Great to see you near the top of the winner's list, Barbara. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/22/2011 11:49:00 AM

BG, I loved it the first time ;) congratulations on your win ;)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/22/2011 10:40:00 AM

Congrats on your win Barbara.Beautiful poem.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/22/2011 7:26:00 AM

This soft poem, filled with the heart of a tear. Lovely writing Barbara! Congratulations on your win!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/22/2011 6:13:00 AM

Tears in wait-how quaint! The second line is well-versed and full of powerful personification! It's no wonder you scored such HM! Have a Belled Easter, Barbara! Gwendolen

Jack Horne

Date: 4/22/2011 4:41:00 AM

Many congratulations and a very happy Easter to you : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2011 4:18:00 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Barbara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/22/2011 4:16:00 AM

Congrats BG on your wonderful winning poem in HG's contest on tears.. perfect piece ..enjoy your top spot win with luv.. and a very blessed and Happy Easter celebration ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2011 11:33:00 PM

This is awesome in its simplicity, Barbara. A very well deserved win. congratulations.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/21/2011 9:50:00 PM

Beautiful BG. Many congrats, Have a blessed Easter.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/21/2011 9:23:00 PM

Very lovely Barbara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/21/2011 9:13:00 PM

Dear Barbara, Thank-YOU for Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations On YOUR 3rd Place Win LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...Harry

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/5/2011 12:30:00 PM

BG, quite a profound entry you have here.. Wishing you all the best for the contest ;)

Date: 4/3/2011 4:37:00 PM

Though provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/3/2011 1:40:00 PM

Tears DO soften the pain and cleanse our souls, dear LNC. I guess that's why some people say they "need a good cry." Quite a profound entry for HG's contest. Wishing you success, dear! Love, Carolyn

Elaine George

Date: 3/31/2011 6:55:00 PM

Very touching, Barbara. Best wishes in the contest. Lainie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/31/2011 4:15:00 AM

Lovely entry to the contest, Barbara

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/30/2011 10:59:00 PM

wonderful sijo Barbara, best of luck in the contest