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Tears Waiting

Waiting, as pure and clear as drops from the high mountain peaks
Trembling now on your lashes as we wait for your heart to break
Tears to soften the pain, and cleanse the troubled soul of the lonely


Barbara Gorelick
For HG's contest.."Personify a Tear"

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/26/2011 4:23:00 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest Barbara. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, CarolCongratulations on your win in the contest . I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/22/2011 4:39:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/22/2011 2:21:00 PM Sometimes one just HAS to cry, very clear here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 4/22/2011 11:52:00 AM Great to see you near the top of the winner's list, Barbara. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/22/2011 11:49:00 AM BG, I loved it the first time ;) congratulations on your win ;) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/22/2011 10:40:00 AM Congrats on your win Barbara.Beautiful poem. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 4/22/2011 7:26:00 AM This soft poem, filled with the heart of a tear. Lovely writing Barbara! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 4/22/2011 6:13:00 AM Tears in wait-how quaint! The second line is well-versed and full of powerful personification! It's no wonder you scored such HM! Have a Belled Easter, Barbara! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/22/2011 4:41:00 AM Many congratulations and a very happy Easter to you : ) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/22/2011 4:18:00 AM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Barbara Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/22/2011 4:16:00 AM Congrats BG on your wonderful winning poem in HG's contest on tears.. perfect piece ..enjoy your top spot win with luv.. and a very blessed and Happy Easter celebration .. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/21/2011 11:33:00 PM This is awesome in its simplicity, Barbara. A very well deserved win. congratulations. Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 4/21/2011 9:50:00 PM Beautiful BG. Many congrats, Have a blessed Easter. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/21/2011 9:23:00 PM Very lovely Barbara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 4/21/2011 9:13:00 PM Dear Barbara, Thank-YOU for Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations On YOUR 3rd Place Win LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...Harry Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/5/2011 12:30:00 PM BG, quite a profound entry you have here.. Wishing you all the best for the contest ;) Login to Reply

Date: 4/3/2011 4:37:00 PM Though provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck in the contest. Karen Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/3/2011 1:40:00 PM Tears DO soften the pain and cleanse our souls, dear LNC. I guess that's why some people say they "need a good cry." Quite a profound entry for HG's contest. Wishing you success, dear! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 3/31/2011 6:55:00 PM Very touching, Barbara. Best wishes in the contest. Lainie Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/31/2011 4:15:00 AM Lovely entry to the contest, Barbara Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 3/30/2011 10:59:00 PM wonderful sijo Barbara, best of luck in the contest Login to Reply