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Tears Waiting

Waiting, as pure and clear as drops from the high mountain peaks
Trembling now on your lashes as we wait for your heart to break
Tears to soften the pain, and cleanse the troubled soul of the lonely


Barbara Gorelick
For HG's contest.."Personify a Tear"

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 26, 2011 at 4:23 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Barbara. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, CarolCongratulations on your win in the contest . I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

April 22, 2011 at 4:39 PM

Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

April 22, 2011 at 2:21 PM

Sometimes one just HAS to cry, very clear here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

John Freeman

April 22, 2011 at 11:52 AM

Great to see you near the top of the winner's list, Barbara. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels

April 22, 2011 at 11:49 AM

BG, I loved it the first time ;) congratulations on your win ;)

Kash Poet

April 22, 2011 at 10:40 AM

Congrats on your win Barbara.Beautiful poem.

Carrie Richards

April 22, 2011 at 7:26 AM

This soft poem, filled with the heart of a tear. Lovely writing Barbara! Congratulations on your win!

Gwendolen Song

April 22, 2011 at 6:13 AM

Tears in wait-how quaint! The second line is well-versed and full of powerful personification! It's no wonder you scored such HM! Have a Belled Easter, Barbara! Gwendolen

Jack Horne

April 22, 2011 at 4:41 AM

Many congratulations and a very happy Easter to you : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 22, 2011 at 4:18 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Barbara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 22, 2011 at 4:16 AM

Congrats BG on your wonderful winning poem in HG's contest on tears.. perfect piece ..enjoy your top spot win with luv.. and a very blessed and Happy Easter celebration ..

Andrea Dietrich

April 21, 2011 at 11:33 PM

This is awesome in its simplicity, Barbara. A very well deserved win. congratulations.

Tahera Mannan

April 21, 2011 at 9:50 PM

Beautiful BG. Many congrats, Have a blessed Easter.

Joyce Johnson

April 21, 2011 at 9:23 PM

Very lovely Barbara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

April 21, 2011 at 9:13 PM

Dear Barbara, Thank-YOU for Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations On YOUR 3rd Place Win LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...Harry

Wilma Neels

April 5, 2011 at 12:30 PM

BG, quite a profound entry you have here.. Wishing you all the best for the contest ;)

April 3, 2011 at 4:37 PM

Though provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

April 3, 2011 at 1:40 PM

Tears DO soften the pain and cleanse our souls, dear LNC. I guess that's why some people say they "need a good cry." Quite a profound entry for HG's contest. Wishing you success, dear! Love, Carolyn