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Tears On a Page

Only ten is she. Assailable as a child can be. Her mind drifts, worry at best, fear at worst. Her ally is her art that expresses it so vividly. The face that she wears on the page, a tear drop just below each eye. This is her identity. Her surroundings exposed. Can you see her pain, hidden behind those beautiful eyes? She wants to be loved like little girls do, The doll she embraces wants love too. Through art, her heart is uncovered. The tears so vivid on the face of a shadowed image. She is that face. Rejected by a mothers sin who can relieve her from this life she navigates, but one friend she holds dear to her heart. Untended, wasted and forsaken but by God. If she can find Him.

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/12/2023 1:17:00 PM

Ray, can you clarify “ rejected by a mothers sin”. Anyway the poem is touching Pangie I find children quite able to overcome their parents weaknesses.

Ray Zottola
Date: 3/13/2023 2:44:00 PM

We tried to rescue 4 children in our neighborhood. The mother brought the police. She wants them for the welfare. Her sin! Sad I am. Jayla, a beautiful 10 year old, drew a picture with tears in her eyes. Then I wrote "tears on a page". My eyes were teared looking at the drawing. So sad! Her brother didn't speak a word at 8 years until I made him breakfast. We talked for the hour. Im sad!

Ondeng Moses Otieno

Date: 12/5/2022 11:28:00 PM

Great poem. Whenever we feel lost and stranded,God will always be there to show us the way.

Ray Zottola
Date: 12/9/2022 6:57:00 AM

A little girl we tried to give anew, until her mother decided to re-enter her life and take her back to the misery. Thank you for taking the time to read it!