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Robert James Liguori, Tears of the Dragon Contest, 8/16/2025; inspired by Bruce Dickinson's song "Tears of the Dragon."

 

Tears of the Dragon

I splashed water on my face;
the mirror cracked in half -
a reflection of fear and doubt.

It was dark in that cold place
of shattered scales.The sea -
rushing over that rusty sink;
and I can’t think about it.

My wings are clipped;
my breath’s dry sulfur.
I said my prayers;
the mirror just chortled.

Chilblains chatter, sore;
the floor, a horror show.
It was doubtful I’m standing -
what for.

Eruption of the mirror
dares me to peek,
but I’m six feet under
my sheets.

It’s Winter here; I drag my tail.
My sharp-teeth-grief’s unyielding.
Of fierce and fiery tears - there is no end;
unholy flames of years misspent.

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Date: 8/18/2025 1:54:00 AM
Yep, someday we must all face our own dragon. Sort of like, The Guardian At The Gate. If to get beyond, we will have to confess and relinquish all that is not of God. Our own reflection, that Guardian At The Gate, can be like confronting Medusa. Never heard the song. So, probably got this all wrong. Good luck in contest. Great read!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2025 4:09:00 AM
You know, Joe, whatever you got out of the poem is okay with me. Thank you for an interesting comment! Hugs
Date: 8/17/2025 7:28:00 AM
Gorgeous poem penned inspired by the song my dear poet friend. I'm sure this will do well in the contest. Thanks a lot for sharing. Thank you so much for visiting my page too. Blessings to you always. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2025 10:23:00 AM
Blessings to you, Len! Thank you!
Date: 8/16/2025 6:25:00 PM
Very impressive, Kim, capturing that sense of winter despair. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you blessings and a Kleenex for your dragon.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2025 6:41:00 PM
Thank you…lol
Date: 8/16/2025 5:30:00 PM
wow, KIm, this poem is powerful and a totally engaging read! Your personification intensifies the emotions. Well done! hugs Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2025 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! <3
Date: 8/16/2025 4:01:00 PM
Kim, this gives me chills, I see myself in some of this, magnetic and powerful, dear Kim, in my favs <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2025 4:07:00 PM
Emotions abound in this one. Many suffer. I hope you find hope and healing. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/16/2025 4:00:00 PM
An intriguing poem with an unusual twist. Hiding beneath sheets always seems so safe. Your poem is fun to read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2025 4:08:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda! Glad you like it!
Date: 8/16/2025 3:55:00 PM
Poetry is getting more and more amazing every day! I laughed, I was sad, I almost cried. Breathtaking personification __Anaya
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2025 4:13:00 PM
Oh…thank you so much, dear one!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2025 4:08:00 PM
Oh…thank you so much, dear one!

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