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Tears Now Soak the Pillowcase

Tears now soak the pillowcase where once you laid your head
I am weeping uncontrollably now that eulogies have been said,
And since you are gone with the wind, I know you are really dead.

I cannot stop sobbing, and my sodden dreams will go on forever
Just as I know our love will go on forever and forever, however,
It is clear to me, now, that we were never meant to be together

Forever, my dearest darling, I know in heaven you are crying tears
Up there somewhere…salty tears flow into your sweet, lovely ears,
So much so, that "my achy, breaky heart" * can find no cheers.

I shall preserve this pillowcase in plastic to allay my recurring fears
I knew our love was not meant to last, I am weeping in my beers,
For you have gone away from me, and I am drowning in my tears.

FIRST PLACE WINNER
Written July 12, 2021
For “The Goblin’s Jewel Box 1” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Jack Webster

HONORABLE MENTION
"Broken Heart" Poetry Contest
All Poetry - October 20, 2021
[* with a nod to Billy Ray Cyrus]

Copyright © L Milton Hankins | Year Posted 2021

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Hilo Poet Date: 8/13/2021 7:55:00 PM I think 'twas Reba I heard do a rendition once, not sure. As I've commented on a few heading down the list, CHEERS, for finding the composition to enter, and having the wherewithal abiding by its chaotic ... I meant, rules. Love your singularity performing a poignant soliloquy, it was meritous for its honorable placement my friend, Aloha! Login to Reply L Milton Hankins Date: 8/13/2021 9:03:00 PM Thank you very much, William. I found it quite challenging, so I am glad with the results.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/12/2021 7:40:00 PM This poem is a remarkable contest contender. It was so engaging from start to finish. You've done a fantastic job, Milton. Best wishes, Evelyn Login to Reply L Milton Hankins Date: 7/12/2021 7:44:00 PM Thank you, Evelyn. I tried to be as "corny" as I could be. We'll see how it goes! Thanks for your encouraging comment.