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Tears In the Moonlight-For Tim Smith

Tim. Your latest poems stirred the memory of this one I recently penned. I stumble down a street, cobbled with broken dreams, hobbled by those memories chained around my heart. Tears glisten as they're captured by silver moonbeams tossed from Luna's fair hand as mine are gently caught.

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James Inman

Date: 4/23/2017 10:39:00 AM

I hope you find the key to unlock those chains Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/23/2017 11:31:00 AM

I found it a few years ago, James. This is one of those half finished poems that I finalized. Thank you for your kind comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/14/2017 11:46:00 AM

Choc full of emotions Lin you really do have a golden pen my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 4/14/2017 1:13:00 PM

You are my number 1 cheerleader, Jan. I smile at your kind words and I'm encouraged to write.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/14/2017 9:58:00 AM

A beautiful poem Lin...even when we stumble someone will be there to catch our tears...thanks for thinking of me.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/14/2017 1:12:00 PM

We've both suffered emotional pain, Tim. I'm reminded of my own when I read you. I thank you for having the courage to write of your loss. It makes it easier to share my own.

Chris Green

Date: 4/14/2017 9:46:00 AM

This was beautiful and a little sad Lin. It also created a magical feeling. Nicely done.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/14/2017 1:07:00 PM

Memories are often painful, Chris. A reflection of my mood, and I think of the one that Tim was in. Thank you for liking this one.