Tears

Tears flowing down my face Teasing me make funny Tell laughs my stomach ache Touch of sadness today Today hurtful words-things Test-life many tears fall To come heaven no tears Date Written: 4/26/2021 3 Place 6 syllables Pleiades T Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/29/2021 8:00:00 PM

Paula, this was very touching! I could picture the scenes you wrote. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/30/2021 11:01:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win in your "T" contest. Glad you like this fun write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day/weekend.........................

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/27/2021 9:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your great Win Paula, you really deserve it, you have done a wonderful Pleiades With my very best regards//lasaad

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/28/2021 8:34:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day...............................

Eve Roper

Date: 4/27/2021 8:00:00 PM

Great Pleiades, Paula , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/28/2021 8:33:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day with hugs...................