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Your Choice T Poem Contest

5th June 2025 New Poem Sponsor : Brian Strand

Rain like crystal tears Shed from the soft fluffy clouds To the thirsty earth.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 6/6/2025 3:40:00 PM

Your haiku offers a tender and poetic perspective on rain, portraying it as a gentle, life-giving outpouring from the clouds to the parched earth, almost like a compassionate act. I like it.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/7/2025 5:27:00 PM

Thank you Bernard. Finding that picture was a plus as it fits well with the poem. Your comment is most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2025 6:16:00 PM

Pretty poem with picture

Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/7/2025 5:27:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea

Jay Narain

Date: 6/5/2025 11:25:00 AM

Nice haiku

Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/5/2025 12:41:00 PM

Thanks Jay, I am determined to attempt all these types of poems. A bit out of my comfort zone when the description says it cant rhyme. I promise I will spend some time today reading yours. So much to do and so little time to fit it all in. Best wishes. Wen

Sand Blown

Date: 6/4/2025 11:05:00 PM

a brilliant floweressence........len

Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/5/2025 5:36:00 AM

thank you Len