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Teardrop

Teardrop Crimson rivers flood our streets For every fallen fellow man As hatred rears its head White, black, and in-between Bullets penetrate our peace Heartbreak follows everyone And leave our innocent dead… Its color is unseen. Does pigment of the skin reflect So many tears are shed today The morals we hold deep Tomorrow will bring more It’s not our color that defines The weight of teardrops crushes deep Who hurts more when they weep. And drowns one to the core… Misguided by a blind desire Approach mankind with loving eyes To judge our fellow man Look deep and cause no fear Such bias tempts a sinful act Skin color shows no person’s soul We strive to understand. For all teardrops are clear... Prejudice still finds a way -By: Meghan C. Hutchings To seal a person’s fate This cycle, kept alive by few Who live and die through hate... This world may always harbor some Whose ignorance won’t cease But glance around with open eyes Most people yearn for peace.

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Date: 3/9/2022 10:31:00 AM
Meghan, I've been coming back to this poem every week or so and have simply been unable to leave a comment that aptly captures the feelings I experience when I read these words. I wish this could be set to music and sung in schools and churches nationwide by all children to help erase the bias that creeps in and pollutes their view of humanity. Where do I even start with sharing my favorite lines? "It’s not our color that defines / who hurts more when they weep" is one, "Skin color shows no person’s soul / For all teardrops are clear" is an excellent closing statement. Poetically, this is emotive and thought-provoking, without crossing that line of feeling like a verbal brick to the head. While reading this I was reminded of a line from a Michael Jackson song I like (called Black and White), "I don't want to spend my life being a color". Keep spreading this message, my friend. You have such a gift.
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Date: 12/21/2021 2:54:00 AM
Children are not born with hate in there hearts, it is something they are taught by their parents. I sometimes wonder if it is even possible to ever break this cycle of hate. This is a powerful piece of writing, Meghan, it causes one to pause and reflect. Merry Christmas my friend and may tomorrow be a better day. John
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 12/21/2021 4:10:00 PM
I agree you with you 100%! I truly hope my poem did not send the message that I feel that children are born with hate in their hearts. As a teacher of 20+ years, I've witnessed the beauty and love in children's hearts, and I've watched adults taint children's natural empathy. It is heartbreaking. Merry Christmas to you, as well! -Meghan
Date: 12/18/2021 2:16:00 PM
You are gifted. Your poem concludes on an especially strong note. I am enjoying reading your top notch verses this snowy day in Canada. All the best, Brian
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 12/20/2021 12:19:00 AM
I want you to know that your beautiful words have me weeping with joy. I feel so blessed that my poetry touched someone. Thank you for saying I'm gifted. I'm in the middle of a crisis right now, as I'm being stalked and my life is in danger, so thank you for bringing joy to my heart in the middle of the night. Blessings! -Meghan
Date: 12/18/2021 1:46:00 PM
A powerful write Meghan. Your last quatrain is exceptionally poignant and your last line in quatrain 2 made me think.
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 12/20/2021 12:22:00 AM
James, thank you so much for your kind response and feedback about those specific lines. It made me look back and feel proud that my message came through. I truly appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts with me. I strongly believe in everything I write. God Bless! -Meghan

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