Teardrop

Teardrop

Crimson rivers flood our streets          For every fallen fellow man
As hatred rears its head                     White, black, and in-between
Bullets penetrate our peace                Heartbreak follows everyone
And leave our innocent dead…            Its color is unseen.

Does pigment of the skin reflect         So many tears are shed today
The morals we hold deep                   Tomorrow will bring more
It’s not our color that defines             The weight of teardrops crushes deep
Who hurts more when they weep.      And drowns one to the core…

Misguided by a blind desire               Approach mankind with loving eyes
To judge our fellow man                    Look deep and cause no fear
Such bias tempts a sinful act             Skin color shows no person’s soul
We strive to understand.                   For all teardrops are clear...

Prejudice still finds a way                           -By: Meghan C. Hutchings
To seal a person’s fate
This cycle, kept alive by few
Who live and die through hate...

This world may always harbor some
Whose ignorance won’t cease
But glance around with open eyes
Most people yearn for peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/9/2022 10:31:00 AM
Meghan, I've been coming back to this poem every week or so and have simply been unable to leave a comment that aptly captures the feelings I experience when I read these words. I wish this could be set to music and sung in schools and churches nationwide by all children to help erase the bias that creeps in and pollutes their view of humanity. Where do I even start with sharing my favorite lines? "It’s not our color that defines / who hurts more when they weep" is one, "Skin color shows no person’s soul / For all teardrops are clear" is an excellent closing statement. Poetically, this is emotive and thought-provoking, without crossing that line of feeling like a verbal brick to the head. While reading this I was reminded of a line from a Michael Jackson song I like (called Black and White), "I don't want to spend my life being a color". Keep spreading this message, my friend. You have such a gift.
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Date: 12/21/2021 2:54:00 AM
Children are not born with hate in there hearts, it is something they are taught by their parents. I sometimes wonder if it is even possible to ever break this cycle of hate. This is a powerful piece of writing, Meghan, it causes one to pause and reflect. Merry Christmas my friend and may tomorrow be a better day. John
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 12/21/2021 4:10:00 PM
I agree you with you 100%! I truly hope my poem did not send the message that I feel that children are born with hate in their hearts. As a teacher of 20+ years, I've witnessed the beauty and love in children's hearts, and I've watched adults taint children's natural empathy. It is heartbreaking. Merry Christmas to you, as well! -Meghan
Date: 12/18/2021 2:16:00 PM
You are gifted. Your poem concludes on an especially strong note. I am enjoying reading your top notch verses this snowy day in Canada. All the best, Brian
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 12/20/2021 12:19:00 AM
I want you to know that your beautiful words have me weeping with joy. I feel so blessed that my poetry touched someone. Thank you for saying I'm gifted. I'm in the middle of a crisis right now, as I'm being stalked and my life is in danger, so thank you for bringing joy to my heart in the middle of the night. Blessings! -Meghan
Date: 12/18/2021 1:46:00 PM
A powerful write Meghan. Your last quatrain is exceptionally poignant and your last line in quatrain 2 made me think.
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 12/20/2021 12:22:00 AM
James, thank you so much for your kind response and feedback about those specific lines. It made me look back and feel proud that my message came through. I truly appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts with me. I strongly believe in everything I write. God Bless! -Meghan
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