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Train of thought Eluded As my cries Run unnoticed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/8/2013 2:05:00 PM
belated congrats, Karen,, awesome and so profound.
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Date: 9/5/2013 3:56:00 PM
awesome win Karen...PD
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Date: 9/5/2013 1:47:00 PM
Very emotive and expressive work.. Enjoyed reading your winner today..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/1/2013 2:01:00 PM
Karen, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2013 1:52:00 PM
So much said in so few words. Congrats on your win, Karen! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/1/2013 8:11:00 AM
Karen I think this is beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/31/2013 8:15:00 PM
congrats on your win :)
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Date: 8/31/2013 5:47:00 PM
a very short one but I really liked it that way . And the way you used the word run at the end, which relates so well to the theme. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 8/29/2013 4:40:00 AM
- Do not cry .... the day is yours! - Well written,Karen !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2013 8:32:00 PM
Hi Karen, Nicely done acrostic poem..... Regards, Ken..
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Date: 8/24/2013 6:47:00 AM
well done...the image comes to life :)
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Date: 8/24/2013 5:45:00 AM
Simply hauntingly beautiful. You evoke so many images with a few words.
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