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Two wolves went for hunting, they found no pray. A tear came down from their eyes. Two bears went for fishing, they found no salmons, but a river full of tears. The pray not found was in the burnt wild. The salmons not found were in the polluted rivers. The tears they cried made an ocean where two men caught them in a net. The two men had nothing but tears and they went searching for gold. They found lands of gold They cried glory tears The gold's mine that made them rich killed the salmons. They've got dollars to spend around. Searching for gold bullion, we have no wolves howling to the moon but spreading metals to the woodland. Looking for salmons, the big grizzles will be a tear in our subconscious. We will be eating gold medals and wining burnt woods. Ashes in the air, many tears to cry. Tied wings to fly to another level, that it's in everybody 's mind. The two wolves found not rank to get their pray to hunt. The two bears found no reason to search for a river. The two men digging for gold, found no ground to dig on. We keep on digging into the wrong mine. Instead we should dig deep inside on ourselves. Not gold worth living beings Wasting time in a right clock where the hands move without stopping. The seconds will make you dock in the harbour where it will be a big tear in your eyes when you have to say good bye to what it really matters: the wolves howling a secret message to humans not to be heard. A secret song we will never have the chance to listen again. A mine of gold beings that worth nothing to many. It doesn't matter, many people think t's a way in the moon we can settle down Far from the sea, far from everything we raised, far from the land we know. A tear came out from my eye straight to my brain. As an indigo child, my tear went into the imposible, ending up with the feet on this Earth 04/14/2023 Constance La France Writing Challenge - 'T' Words - Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/17/2023 11:24:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... I enjoy reading it once again, Maria :) - hugs
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/17/2023 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine. Hugs
Date: 4/15/2023 3:05:00 PM
Maria, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge !
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/15/2023 3:13:00 PM
Thank you Contance.
Date: 4/15/2023 2:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your contest win, Maria. Your poem is fantastic and your views are so insightful.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/15/2023 2:42:00 PM
Thank you Sotto but I want to grow up with your beautiful poetry. Have a nice day
Date: 4/15/2023 9:48:00 AM
Fabulous insight Maria. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/15/2023 9:50:00 AM
Hello Linda and thank you so much. Hugsxx
Date: 4/15/2023 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Maria
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/15/2023 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Alfonso. Hugsxx
Date: 4/15/2023 12:21:00 AM
wonderful , poem, it is crucial to denonce .human avidity, this is so sad and unveil an uncertain future, thanks for the deep and great penning yann
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/15/2023 12:48:00 AM
Good morning Yann. Thank you very much. Bonne journée.
Date: 4/13/2023 4:24:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Maria - everything is possible, turn from tears to joy... I went for the same theme - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/13/2023 4:41:00 PM
Hello Sunshine. Thank you I wish you luck too.But I just write and sometimes the contests makes me keep on,writing, otherwise maybe I don't bother. If I apoly for the contest makes me write, something to do and that is what it really matters. Keepung on writing. Wish you luck too

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