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“From the shattered heart the streams of sorrow with the shards of dream drowned in tears flow.” – By Poet The cloud of gloom hovers over the sea of sorrow, surges in distress tempest to my mental visage, and melts to make the stream of tears to flow like the trail of rain drops on the face of foliage. With the brine condensing the pain of molten grief, the tear drops are poised on the eyelashes for a while. Like the raindrops on the edge of the leaning leaf, they slide down slowly with the dream debris pile. Down the parched crease of the pallid cheeks, cascade the silent streams of soothing solace. The touch of the serene soul the mourning mind seeks in the course of tears and in its embalming embrace. The wasteland of life is flooded by the torrent of despair, until from ruins of broken heart the new sun rises with grace, and desiccates the trail of the drops of tear, veiling the trace of sorrow for the mind to erase. ____________ April 13, 2023 Word Chosen : Tear Contest : Writing Challenge - "T" Words Sponsored by : Constance La France

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Date: 4/17/2023 11:04:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Subimal :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/22/2023 11:11:00 PM
Thank you, SS.
Date: 4/16/2023 12:57:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/quote. Have a blessed day/week..................
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/22/2023 11:11:00 PM
Thank you, Paula.
Date: 4/15/2023 2:46:00 PM
Subimal, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! I love your quote !
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/22/2023 11:11:00 PM
Thyank you, Constance for the placement.
Date: 4/15/2023 9:38:00 AM
I love the imagery you have conjured in this lovely poem Subimal. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/22/2023 11:10:00 PM
Thank you, Linda for liking the poem.
Date: 4/13/2023 9:30:00 AM
A lovely write. I also took "tear" as my word. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/22/2023 11:10:00 PM
Many thanks, Paula.
Date: 4/13/2023 3:04:00 AM
- I wrote about the same topic and our poems have several similarities ... a wonderful poem, Subimal - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/22/2023 11:10:00 PM
Thank you, SS for your encouraging comments.

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