Tear

magic fermented smiles touching clouds evaporated mock? taunt? troll? negative? insult provoke stoke in Chatham or love breathe lend a hand lovely and grand storms negative vibes no more brandy only wine sour grapes hide A king Harif soothes all my voices even if both cry rainbows ignore the rain dance arm in arm sunshine shines wisdom speaks for whom is kind sunshines

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/8/2018 2:29:00 PM

Hello Arthur, I also like this poem.I read this poem several times. have a nice day my friend.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/22/2018 6:17:00 AM

A lovely poem, Arthur:)

Darren White

Date: 10/21/2018 1:34:00 AM

Thanks and smiles, this is a lovely poem! And I love how you shaped it :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2018 9:01:00 PM

Those that have sunshine in their hearts are kind and no fake smiles only real sincere ones :) and mine is real... Thank you for always being supportive and kind with me

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/20/2018 8:23:00 AM

Lovely <3

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/20/2018 6:14:00 AM

Nice closing lines...the sparkle of a tear...All the best Arthur

Lin Lane

Date: 10/20/2018 4:31:00 AM

I love to dance in the rain, but I've never liked brandy. I prefer to drink it as wine before it's aged. For those who are kind, the sun does shine. Well written.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2018 4:08:00 AM

For many reasons I have tears reading your poem Arthur, the final part is a lovely tribute to your friend and also reminds me of Anne-Lise who brings so much joy to the site:-) hugs Jan xx

White Wolf

Date: 10/20/2018 2:22:00 AM

I love this one and its ambiguity. But to me, not so ambiguous at all. well said, Great Bear