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Tear-Tainted Sail

In the beginning this boat was bare, Greenest with infant's sinless stare; Before soles more selfish than sane Had trodden its dreary derelict main. First to blacken its still-tiptop form Were kith and kin as is sin's norm; For if brother Cain won't Abel kill, Which other bloodier maniac will? Then hopped wild neighbors' feet Onto this boat's floor sterile neat; And like schythes thrust to the hilts, Hurt this bud that yet writhing wilts. Nor were classmates' limbs and toes Any kinder to this vessel's prior woes; Hasty to sprain its ingenuous naiveté, Sterner kilning did than fire dealt clay. There finally was that first-ever flame, Wooled to the wrist like a mild dame; Which vulpine swill in flannels guised Took I, and at last this boat capsized!

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Date: 8/6/2020 7:01:00 PM
Great poem, sad ending to a great boat.
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 8/6/2020 9:09:00 PM
...sad ending indeed, Debby - to have that fate-buffeted boat so helplessly capsize.

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