Get Your Premium Membership

Tea Is Served

Gathered in the shade of her quaint little garden, where a trellis was woven with rose climbing vines, something enchanting, had been deftly designed, on an ordinary day, on a May afternoon. A teapot was held, with her large knuckled hands, to a bouquet of her friends, (also neighbors of mine), by the most gentile’ of women, that I've ever known… It felt like a scene from a time long ago, when decorum was proper, and manners were too, before composure, and poise,.. were a thousand years old, where propriety still mattered, and was as precious as gold. ~ Lilting voices would chatter like the birds on the wing. Laughter was singing, across fragrant grass, Flower frocked ladies, around a few scattered tables. Linens and laces, under ashes and maples. Silver coifed hairdos, with apple cheeked faces, And me? There I sat.... quite out of my place... Drinking it in, in the cool, dappled shade. Taking a sip, with a small plate on my lap ~ Delightful surprises to bewitch the eyes… Delicate confections, cucumber sandwiches, made by her hand, for just this occasion. Branches of jasmine, covered verandas.… Rose petal blossoms, painted on china. The most beautiful tea set, oh, how divine! Envious eyes, covetously pined for it! She wore a floppy garden hat, a dress of mauve, and there she sat. Her weathered skin, her cheeks of rouge... a smile to love,...you would have too,... She had lived a war, and more than one.....iron strong, a generous heart Knowing eyes, and sparkling wit, She would hold your hand in hers and smile,... listen well, of that I'm sure and then would sip and chat awhile, of this and that… and you would learn to love, somehow ~ I sipped my tea, and watched it all, and never thought of future things. ~ But now I sit here all alone…the chatter gone, the birds have flown. Where once her charm, her love of life the grand old ways, have slipped away Soon after, in the autumn chill…word soon spread that she was ill I was away, and never knew.….I hope, oh Lord, she was not alone …. And looking back …I think of that….. and how strange the fact….. how odd it is….. that something owned by someone grand, a china cup, so delicate, so fragile in the hand, can last beyond the grave...intact,…. although a dear, enchanting friend, her life would have to end….. ~ ~ _______________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 3/10/2014 4:00:00 PM
I love the philosophical musing at the end! Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/10/2014 6:37:00 AM
Lovely write. Congratulations on the fine win, carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 3/9/2014 10:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Carrie, and thank you for entering :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/2/2013 10:07:00 PM
So beautifully done! And I wonder, , did she have "lonely violet eyes?" It just made me remember another poem. This one is saved. RAY
Login to Reply
Date: 5/2/2013 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 5/1/2013 6:15:00 PM
Carrie, a nice winning poem in the "WORD PORTRAIT" contest :-) *LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 5/1/2013 6:22:00 AM
My, my...this is pretty darn incredible, Carrie. Congrats!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/30/2013 11:49:00 PM
This is lovely. There is something to be said of the genteel days and folks and you have said it. Congratulations on a beautiful description of elegance. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 4/30/2013 7:18:00 PM
A beautiful heartfelt portrait of a loved and cherished friend. Congrats on your lovely win. Hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 4/30/2013 10:11:00 AM
What a lovely portrait for such a wonderful occasion, very touching and emotional, Carrie, enjoyed it. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/30/2013 9:58:00 AM
This is an exceptional poem you have written Carrie. I would have loved do be one of her lady friends sipping tea and listening to stories she had told. Congratulations on the fine poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
Login to Reply
Date: 1/17/2012 1:00:00 PM
Touching. Congratulations on the win. Excellently done...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/9/2012 10:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your great write. Best regards, Jon
Login to Reply
Date: 1/9/2012 8:47:00 AM
Carrie-such a touching story. Congrats. to you!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/9/2012 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on you win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 1/9/2012 12:30:00 AM
brimming storu down to the last detail.. congrats on the fine win, carrie!:) huggs!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/8/2012 10:59:00 PM
I love this story and was glad to see it place highly in Debbie's contest. Congratulations Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 1/8/2012 8:10:00 PM
CONGRATS CARRIE ON A WONDERFUL WIN FOR THIS GRAND STORY ...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/8/2012 1:34:00 PM
You do have a way with words, Carrie. What a beautiful, descriptive, poetic and graceful tale you have left us with here. I could see the tea party and I could feel your sympathy of her passing and the cherishing of her memory. Absolutely beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Joe
Login to Reply
Date: 1/8/2012 12:50:00 PM
You gave me just what I asked for and more, I adored the way you laid out the tale on the page ;), you ALWAYS show your heart and that is why you always win, congrads Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2011 12:32:00 PM
Very touching and vivid
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2011 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Constance's "I Fancy Another Sad Poem" contest Carrie. I am truly honored to share a top spot with you. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2011 1:08:00 AM
I have often wondered that too, why man made things go on. Congratulations on a delicately beautiful poem and your top win. Love,Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 8/21/2011 12:01:00 PM
Definitely deserved a first place. Great offering. Congratulations Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 8/21/2011 11:17:00 AM
Amazing, Carrie. Enchantingingly sad and beautiful. LOVE IT, and congratulations.
Login to Reply
12

Book: Reflection on the Important Things