Tea For Two

he poured himself his usual cup of happy
most days he took it the same
straight from the pot
a clean pot with traces of yesterday rinsed away
but just occasionally
he chose to add a wistful of bittersweet
and shed a tear or two

  *****

she sipped from her cup of bittersweet
most days she took it the same
straight from the pot
a crazed pot that wept traces of yesterday
but just occasionally
she allowed herself to add a crystal of hope
and stemmed a tear or two

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/18/2011 2:50:00 PM
Life just aint stagnate. I suppose it would be dismal to be happy or sad all the time. A very clever and original way of expressing the human condition. Love it. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 1/17/2011 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week on PoetrySoup Sharon. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2010 11:37:00 AM
There's a sadness about this piece Sharon. It's like two poems in one with loss being the word shared >> James ;)
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Date: 6/4/2010 10:04:00 PM
Very clever writing!
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Date: 5/28/2010 3:04:00 AM
Nicely done in the symbolism that you have used to evoke the meanings behind the tea. Perhaps they shoud be reading the leaves as well. Great write! Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.
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Date: 5/26/2010 5:14:00 AM
wonderful, enjoyed, SHARON,..p.d.
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Date: 5/25/2010 11:40:00 PM
Beautiful contrasts Sharon.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/25/2010 10:25:00 PM
VEry interesting writing, Sharon. Nikko told me to check you out, so I did and it is delightful. Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/25/2010 9:16:00 PM
How beatiful you have written this poem, it reminded me so of my parents, who loved their cup of tea..
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Date: 5/25/2010 3:34:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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