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where did love go when it left the even flow of having and not having the romance and the unknown when the one that slept beside me no longer seems beside me and arguments have left me all alone with my misdeeds, mistakes and groans and hideous memories take hold cruelties and vicious words were thrown and the point of no return has been past it was the final argument, surely the last when last pleas have been wept and final blows have been dealt truly there is no hope for the one with whom for years i slept and in my loneliest hours i wept do my feelings for God's law show contempt are my emotional atachments so inept on i blundered so bereft where is justice now it's vengeance must compensate somehow but silent are the wheels of justice and unfair the time is to repair the injustice sleep. rest while my fight is down for surely if you were awake i'd clown but moments have past when i wish the old you was around that part of you my love could arouse sleep and dream of someplace better where my bitterness is from you sheltered where my vows to you are still espoused safe from words that criticize and all opinions that epitomize the man hid behind the guise of hatred and feelings he despises against love our realities compromised our romance was not successfully visualized not alone, i have come to realize loves neglect our doom and demise farewell, to the not so distant past hello to the despair at last with heart felt destain do we crash remembereing our love past (Collaboration between D. G. and J.H.L )

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Date: 4/4/2009 3:41:00 PM
A sad reality is a lost love. Passion, sadness, sorrow, feelings for all that was lost. You made us feel your pain heart John. Excellent write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/3/2009 5:20:00 PM
Excellent write John. Very touching, sad and heart felt. Thanks for the comments on my writes John...Hugs~~
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Date: 3/22/2009 2:01:00 AM
i love this poem,its so true,the past so nice with your loved one and then smtimes things start to change,its so difficult when love turns to hatred,you explained so clear,live for today,yesterday is history,that's my motto
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Date: 3/21/2009 7:20:00 PM
Astounding flow and perception~ Your ability to relate these heartfelt feelings in a poem so vividly, truly shows just how powerful your pen really is~! Lovely job John....last pleas wept, and a sad reality for many my friend. Always know you became more while you thought you were becoming less...jane
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Date: 3/19/2009 2:16:00 PM
Very sad and heart-wrenching work, John. I always find it heartbreaking with two people who were once in love lose the treasure they found together. Is D.G. Donna Golden?
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Date: 3/19/2009 4:26:00 AM
this one I can relate to, John, incredibly gripping, I felt every word! & understand your comments, Best, Jim
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Date: 3/17/2009 4:47:00 PM
I have read all three vesions of this. Still a great verse with the changes. The deep emotions are heartfelt. Beautiful, touching verse, John. Excellent work, my talented friend! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/17/2009 5:12:00 AM
Your passion just comes out in your poetry--it just flows...
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Date: 3/16/2009 3:02:00 PM
Great emotion in this heartfelt poem, maybe a free verse. Great flow and the emotion is so strong, it bring the reader to the same place in the heart. I know alot of others can relate to this, greatwork. Judy riley
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