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Tattered

tattered barn beaten and weathered ~ winter leftovers AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on January 30, 2020 for contest STRICT HAIKU sponsored by WILLIAM KEKAULA Originally posted on July 1, 2019

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Date: 7/2/2019 9:33:00 PM
Very well depicted, Line...We might say the same thing about Chicago's streets, 'Holy they be' (post-winter). :) gw
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Date: 7/2/2019 11:39:00 PM
Yes indeed, a tribute to potholes everywhere.
Date: 7/2/2019 7:04:00 AM
I could picture it, and somehow it saddened me.
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Date: 7/2/2019 7:06:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

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