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Tatterdemalion

Three bangle bracelets
three initial charms, discrete
July birthday gift from my grandkids.
Three bangle bracelets
initially a set complete
until one bangle hit the skids.

Searching for a small bauble
proved very unsuccessful 
December has too many places.
Searching for a new bauble
proved equally distressful, 
I must buy a whole new bracelet.

Four months later a downpour
caused flooding along our ditch
checking it out, discovery!
Four months later that downpour
had washed my dogie from her niche
April rains had set her free.

Tatterdemalion
she looked deplorable and mangled
having spent months on the street.
Tatterdemalion
she looks adorable, re-bangled
now - good-luck charm – oft-beat.

written May 2, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/13/2017 8:50:00 AM
Hi Reason: Please accept me as a fan. I loved this poetic rendition of a lost bauble and who hasn't lost one at one time or another. It stirred me to read many more of your poems and I was deeply moved.
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Date: 5/15/2017 1:21:00 PM
I thank you, Ralph and am glad to have a fan. It was a special moment to look down and see what I had looked for so long elsewhere. Glad you took time to read other pieces. I appreciate your supportive comment.

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